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your wedding ring

i hung your wedding ring on our christmas tree

i felt  it was the right thing to do,

i know if you were here you wouldn´t hesitate 

you would do the same for me to ,

Sweet jesus how i miss my girl

and all those thing´s that remind me of her ,

i would give all i have just to see her one more time 

two people in love that´s what we where,

Christmas card´s come flowing through my mail box

from all our friend´s , but i never told them aneything ,

how suddenly you were taken away from me

o what pain this day did bring,

But everybody wishes us a happy christmas

friend´s from near and from far away,

as tear´s fall onto those loveing card´s

but without you i dont want this day,

So i decide to read them anyway

because these christmas card´s are for you to,

and as your wedding ring shines on our tree

i´ll carry on with my memories that´s always you .

writen 

by

paul o carroll 

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Tina Moore

i.m gonna cry paul ,this is so sad . christmas being a time of joy and all ,there are always some hidden people somewhere hurting .       tina x

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Paul Carroll

thanks tina i know it is a sad poem , but sometimes people hide there sorrows ,

it´s sad but it´s life , thanks again tina and happy christmas xxxx

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Tina Moore

merry christmas paul ,and im one of them but have my weans so thats good enough . still hard  when it is covered when you meet people.  hope things change   tina x

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Paul Carroll

thanks susan the irish girl who has a way with words ,
thanks again susan love your pomes and happy christmas xxxx

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Susan O'Reilly

ah thanks paul have a great christmas from me and mine to you and yours Nollaig Shona Dhuit x

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Charles Funderburg

A brave expression of loss, Paul. It's something that we don't like dealing with, but at times, must.

Well done, and may the Reason for the Season bless you!

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Jason Lee

Lovely heartfelt write Paul ;)

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Paul Carroll

thanks jason happy you liked it and happy christmas  have a good one 

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Paul Carroll

thanks charles for such a lovley comment , and happy christmas

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Random Enigma

This is tragic but absolutely beautiful!  If this is a true story you have my deepest sympathies!  Also, my admiration for getting through it so gracefully as the poem describes.

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Paul Carroll

thanks random

thank god for me this story isent true but for some sadley it is ,

thanks again random and happy christmas 

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Random Enigma

Gosh, I'm so relieved!  Merry Christmas to you as well!

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Jenni Smith

Brought a tear to my eye :'(

beautifull! 

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