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Yoy were never true

Yoy were never true

Years have Passed..And I am still alone
Thinking of you day and night
I am waiting for your phone..

You said to me you would never leave
Now you have gone
Making it difficult for me to believe..

Whenever the clouds thunder
And lightening strikes my room
I wish I could come close to you
And feel the smell of your perfume..

We had seen beautiful dreams together
You promised to be with me forever

We laughed we consoled
You taught me to be bold...

I miss your voice..I miss your song..
I stare blankely ahead 
But the path seems too long..

You said I was the whole world for you
But for you the things have changed
And everything is new..

How could you forget the love we had
How can you forget my smile..
I gave away my everything to you
My happiness dreams and even my style..

I never thought you would go like this
You will find someone better..
I always thought I had melt your heart
And was the queen of your dreams
But you were busy with your own fantasies
And never listened to my screams..

The days are as if I am forced to live
The nights soo scary and alone
I still think of those lovely days
Which you have somewhere thrown

You cared for me like a new born child
You loved and loved and never were wild

You never were true 
You played a game
I was soo wrong I never blamed..!

But even today I have a smile
Thinking of those beautiful days
I still love the songs you played
And your adoring darling ways..!!

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Ravindra Kumar

Dear Surabhi Saxena Jee,

Fragrance of true love is prevailing from the first line till end in the poem. If the soul contains pure particles of love no power could dare to defy her at any moment there is only need of becoming bold and sagacious. The following lines are not impressive expressing fact also -

"I miss your voice..I miss your song..

I stare blankly* ahead

But the path seems too long.."

Ravindra Kumar

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Please don't mind...correct word is 'blankly' not 'blankely'.

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Surabhi Saxena

Thank you dear for your lovely comment. .no worries. .Thanks for the correction. .
Love
Surabhi

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piusha singh

Awww such a sweet sad write my dear...I am loving each lines written by you...

My high five and this to my favourite club...
Love and hugs go u..

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Surabhi Saxena

Thankuu my sweet heart. .Lovee ur bful comments ..which are as sweet as u..thankqq for the stars...and ur vote. .
Much Lovee
Your Darling friend
Surabhi. .;)

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Dear Surabhi Saxena,

Very emotional write, My vote & My nomination

never thought you would go like this
You will find someone better..
I always thought I had melt your heart
And was the queen of your dreams
But you were busy with your own fantasies
And never listened to my screams..

Love, regards

WILLIAMSJI

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Surabhi Saxena

Thank you soo much Sir for your vote and for your precious nom..!! It really means a lott to mee..:)You really motivate me a lott..:)
Loads of Love
Surabhi

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Dear Surabhi,

I wish to include this verse in my " Poet's Pen " with your kind permission.

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Surabhi Saxena

For sure Sir..I will be glad..and it would be my honour to be included in your writing once again..:)
Loads of Love
Surabhi

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