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Tony Taylor

Dear poet brother EDWARD!!......that was a such a cool read/write!!.....amazing really!!....I think FRANK would truly be happy with what you've done here...as you know, he was ALL about the abstract/surreal potential in art as a whole.......I think anyone who likes Zappa will appreciate this my friend!!......"Life is a Fable"......Rock on brother!!......ALL STARS!!.....well penned!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xoΒ  : )

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Edward Williams

Thank you tony i love to hear good coments from you .im happy u liked it .

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Edward Williams

Thanks greg .
IL TELL YOU ALL WHY I WAS SO INTENT ON DOING THIS ONE..
i realize zappa is Way UNDER RATEDΒ 

U WANT INPERATION PUT ON A ZAPPA TUNE ...I HAVE I RESPECT FR HIM I THINK THATS WHAT HE DOES ON POURPOSE .INSPIRE

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Katina Woodruff...

Thank you!Β 

I'm checking out a video now, to learn about Frank Zappa. So interesting. I had no idea. Great learning something new about someone so talented! My brother is a drum player for a band called: EPIK. So I appreciate musicians.Β 

I like your poem because it was short, descriptive and effective.Β 

Link I found:Β 
What makes 'The Black Page' so difficult?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CmV3Bf2veAg

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Edward Williams

The percution version is tge best ..the original with sheet music on the screen

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Sarfraz Ahmed

Edward, my fellow poet, this has zapped some life into me...truly brilliant!

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