A new story I am writing , feed back please !

The soothing sound of the waves drifting by lulled me to sleep.
When I awoke, I was no longer on my long chair near the ocean, but in a cold, dark, small room. Surely I must just be having a nightmare I thought as I tried pinching myself awake. No luck.
I felt around the room for a light, when I found it , i flicked it on and it bathed the room in a yellowish dim color. All I could see was a mirror opposite of me . No windows, cold tile floor and a white ceiling that had black spots all over it . Underneith the mirror I found a radio. There was an opening for a casette tape and sure enough , there one was waiting to be played.
"Hello, prisoner. " Came a dark voice thru the speakers. I know you. Your name is Jade bennet. You have blonde hair and hazel eyes , your lips are a bright red and your skin is pale . You're a photographer and you're 23 years old. You live a lone in your apartment off of Rose Lane and you have one cat that keeps you company. It's clear that I know who you are but the question is , who am I ? "
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Well done dear... keep it up...
Thank you !