Eve (part 5)
In those twenty minutes Eve sat silently on the bathroom floor her sanity escaped drop by drop through the windows of her will to live. A labyrinth of oblivion exploding in darkness. Her mind had become a maze of confusion coated with denial. To reach reality and regain the urge to continue life it's self meant to follow the droplets of her memories. They represented her only hope radiating down the path of her past. Like breadcrumbs she followed them. She stopped before the first droplet allowing it to surge through her absorbing the memory she had buried deep...
"Help! He's not breathing, he's not breathing!"
The sound of Matt's voice shook and grounded Eve in the past. She blinked hard at Sam who lied limp in Matt's arms. The toddler was blinking rapidly while gasping for air his eyes rolled back displaying only the whites of his eyes.
"What happened to him Matt?"
Eve demanded to know as she scooped her son into her arms.
"He must of swallowed a rock."
Matt answered looking down at the floor.
"I'll go get mom."
Julie blurted then ran to her mothers room. Seconds later Julie returned with car keys in hand.
"Mom said to take him to the hospital now."
Julie grabbed her sweater then ran out the front door. Eve grabbed her coat and followed Julie. Amanda followed Eve yelling,
"I'm going with you."
Julie started the car put it in reverse, then drove down the back roads towards the hospital. Eve looked down at her son whose eyes were still fluttering clearly struggling to stay focused. Sam wheezed through what would be his only words,
"Mum... mum,mum,mum,ma".
With the sound of his shaken voice he stopped fighting. His eyes closed and his body was still. Eve panicked.
"No, wake up! Don't go to sleep, stay with me. SAM, WAKE UP!"
She continued to scream at the toddler while she slapped him repeatedly desperate to see his eyes open. In the back seat Amanda stirred at the sight of Eves panic. Amanda insisted with a calm but firm loud tone,
"Give him to me, I know CPR."
Eve hesitated still begging her son to open his eyes. She let out hysterical laughter when he did open them again. He looked up at her weary and let out through wheezes followed by gasps of air his final words his mother would every hear.
"Mummum, mummum."
"Give him to me, I know CPR!"
Amanda continued to tell Eve and reluctantly she hand over her son to Amanda when Julie yelled at her,
"GIVE HER THE BABY!"
On the way Julie came to a red stop light with no traffic in sight she still stopped abiding the law even in this hectic situation. While Amanda continued to preform CPR on Sam, Eve turned to her friend yelling,
"ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME? FUCKING GO. DRIVE NOW!"
Julie in her own state of panic floored the gas driving the final distance to the Out-reach Hospital. As they pulled into the the Emergency rooms round about Amanda open the door without the car at a complete stop she jumping out with ease still holding Sam in her arms, she ran through the open sliding door. She screamed at the receptionist,
"He's not breathing."
Eve ran behind Amanda in time to see the Emergency double doors open exposing the emergency room and staff behind them. Several staff member ran to Sam taking him to a room to began resuscitating the toddler. Eve ran behind them all. As she began to enter the room she was stopped by a nurse who instructed her to wait outside the room.
"But I'm his mom."
"We can not do our job to save him with you here, you are a distraction. Please take a seat over there."
She pointed to the chairs down the hall against the wall.
"Come on girl, let them do their job."
Julie tugged at her shirt. They sat waiting until a counselor showed up relocating them to a private room.
To be continued....
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I would love help from all the extremely talented people here on cosmofunnel with punctuation and grammer. I try my best with what little talent i have. This is my real life story and after many i have posted i decided to just let everyone know i am Eve. I cant really say anything other than that. However if you would like more detail just let me know. I hope i do not offend anyone with my honesty that is not my goal. I just want to put myself out there, at this point of my life i am an open book. Thank you for reading i admire and appreciate you all.
Very interesting, capturing moments frozen in minds memories is not at all easy to portray, when things, situations have a great impact on, in our lives the very memories always lye bare, and fresh, leaving every moment to be clearly told, well done, i await the next continuum xoxo.
Thank you nardine I appreciate you taking the time to read my story.
it's me buddaman again. I just finished reading all of eve , well up to part 5...if it's true my condolences ....really don't want to comment on the reality of your stories, like I said my condolences.
I just want to tell you your way of writing is real good. you can paint pictures with words real good. try to pitch it to a publisher as your auto biography or you can go to these book companies with about a thousand bucks they can help you publish your book.
do have any fiction stories to post I would love to read those.
oh one more ? on part 4 was the letter you wrote on your story from matt the actual letter he sent to you?
I hope I'm not imposing .. you don't have to answer if you don't want
please let me know if my ?'s or my comments offended you in any way. that's not my intention I just like your writing .!!!
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