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Fearsome screams

"Words" . They supossed to help us manifest the feelings , the madness , the sadness , the love , the pain , the "everything" that lays beyound the appearance . But what happens when that purpose is not fulfilled ? What if the words are just a burden to the undying soul ? Even so , we foolish grab of the "words" , hoping that we cound fathom the true nature of their meaning . 
Even so , can you be sure that "words" and " logic " could ever comprehend the unfathomable power and wormth of the "feeling " that thrives to be expressed ?
What happens when the "feelings" are fettered by "words" ? What happens with the screams that haven't been screamed ? What happens with the tears that have not been cryed ? 
 

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Katina Woodruff...

Favorite part: 

"Words" . They supossed to help us manifest the feelings , the madness , the sadness , the love , the pain , the "everything" that lays beyound the appearance . 

You did a good job in the beginning with letting the reader know what was going on.  

Thank you for sharing your poem. 
Have a wonderful evening. 

 

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Cosmin

Thanks for your opinion. Usually when i start to write, i just want to express my feelings. Is, how to say, the "raw material"? The objective of the poem is the madness that screams beneath the words. That feeling when you want to do something or say something but you feel like is not enouf or something (trauma, past, anxiety, fear) keeps you back. I will try to keep in mind your words. Bless you

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Katina Woodruff...

Thank you for the reply. It makes perfect sense now, thank you for clarifying. Well done. :) 

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