THE LAST DANCE
Sparrowsong?
It's me Rachel...
Hello Rachel...
How are you?
That's what I'm calling about Sparrowsong...
I'm listening...
Is there anyway you can come out tonight?
What's up Rachel?
My mom has a friend here and...
She has devastating news that she shared with my mother...
She has a last wish...
She wants to go dancing, but she doesn't want to go alone...
I would like some company myself...
I understand Rachel...
Hold on Rachel...
May I go to a dance with Rachel, her Mom and her friend...
That would be fine Sparrowsong...
Yes I can go sith you Rachel...
We will pick you up on the way Sparrowsong...
Great see you then...
Thank you Sparrowsong...
You're welcome Rachel...
Here we are...
Would you ladies like to dance...
Yes Thank you...
This is my last dance...
Why?
She's dying Sparrowsong...
I don't like sad news...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
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OucH sad and bit of emotional roller coaster
ride vey oy hope things OK
Powerful piece of writing. Luv J a i :)
awwww...beaututiful angel....what wonderful dialogue....until the end....you made me cry....I hope all is well.....you are needed....please do not die.....
Love and hugs angel
Giggles the Poet
Hello Jai and Brenda...
All is well no worries...
Still having kidney trouble...
I am in the last stage, but I am still able to sit and stand...
I feel like I have quite a few years physically, but we never know...
Whatever it is...
I wrote this based on a couple of facts...
Thank you for your kind comments...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hey my Feathery friend!!.........sorry I've been down the last few days...........I didn't get the photo's........I got an email.........but the photo's weren't attached.........would love to see those..........I agree with the above comments on this piece..........dripping a kind of slow sadness...........unique and compelling (as usual).........talk later sweety!!.............T xo
Hello Tony...
Thank you for your comment...
I will get with my friend and see if he knows what happened on the pics...
We will try again later...
Hugz...
Feathers
I will let you know...
Thank you for letting me know...