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I looked up and screamed out his name. "Sagi !". The bomb then went off and collapeced the building around him. The debris started to come at me like a black storm and hit me like a beach wave. My team all crouched  down to withstand the wind' some of us fell back due to its force. After it cleared one of the squad leaders came up and said we had to go get him out. Out f shock I could not respond to him.

Sagi had been a long time friend, we went to the same military school, wanted the same military unit, did basic together and even ended in the same unit together. The only reason I was his commander was because he took the fall for when I was drunk driving from a party we had from graduation of basic. We were close. 

Sagi and I were not always close. There was a point were we had a separation. He finished the military school and I was kicked. The school had been trying to take out the extra individuals since it was a school for the totally gifted. My grades were not even close to as good as his were, but I did have the physical advantage. There was not physical challenge that I could not do at the first try. But could think at least 10 moves before he moved so he had the brains to overcome anyone. I did not. 

I moved to Seattle. Out of the middle east and into the safe zones. I had promised all of my peepers that I would become a grate martial arts fighter and be able to protect them if needed. The first thing I did when I got to Seattle was look for a good teacher that could do that. Shifu is what I called him. He was a tall black powerful looking man. One  man that you  instantly had respect for, one that you could learn from, not just how to fight but grate things from. We started the traning at the other students level that I was in no condition to do, but he put me through it to see where I would start off at. It was 6 full months before I could get a belt  and to my shock it was not a withe belt. He had put me in the intermediate level of the school and in the privet lessons of the black belts. When he gave me the chance to prove myself that's all I did. With out him knowing I manged to put in a good 48 hours a week.

Finishing up high school with many problems, I had been coming back from a party with friends and well one good friend B. B was the cool guy that everyone loved. He was the guy in high school you could always love. But between B the other guy and her... she had my attention. We had meet before but I didn't notice her. We were talking about hands and well she showed me her hand and I took it and well she held on to mine. It was a little odd cuz she was in the front seat and I was in the back on the opposite side of the car. She didn't know this but she had taken my heart then. 

And from then it just had to end sadly...

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Hi Last Sword,

A story well narrated, good fiction, my applause, my vote, five stars

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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