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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Chantal Emmenis poem, titled "Emotional questions"

POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Chantal Emmenis poem, titled "Emotional questions"

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  • POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on
  •  Chantal Emmenis poem,
  • titled "Emotional questions"

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  • Emotional questions
  • By
  • Chantal Emmenis

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As morning rises and the sun comes out
My heart feel heavy with despair
All night my thoughts betrayed my heart
My feelings uneasy, left alone in dreadful dark

(Emotional feelings of love are being nurtured within our hearts, we feel the love that others touch us with, and our emotions rise in response to the love that we feel to the opposite sex, whether male or female)

All was well before he ruined it all again
All was peaceful and my heartfelt sane
Every choice I made felt right without question
Each step I took was a long confident stride

(The arousing feelings of love bring us to a sensation of ecstasy, a thrilling psychological state of great joy. The feelings of love we feel come from an initiation of love, where love intercommunicates on our loving intentions)

How can one call from him have sent it all spiraling?
My steps cut short, forced back into the past
He is trying to pull me back into his emotional web
Trying to fight leaves me a frail, exhausted wreck

 ( The feelings of love follow the affections of love by way of love intentionality. In other words, love feelings follow loving actions.. Everybody wants to feel the emotional feelings associated with love, and the feelings that accompany love and it's after effects)

I now question every step, every breath I take
Are the choices I have made not wrong somehow?
Should I be feeling this way and why does my head betray me?
Why am I not allowed to move forward, why am I caged in the past?

(Often it is our ability to appreciate the love that we receive that elevates our emotional feelings. Love needs elaborate emotions, sentimental to each and every one in this universe)

How am I to break this emotional cage?
How do I break free from his reach, from his pain?
How far can I run before he ensnares my feelings again?
What good am I in my present being if I’m not allowed a new start? 

(Everyone has a desire to be loved and to naturally feel the feelings that accompany love. Remember though that the feelings come in reaction to the love that is expressed)

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 We sometimes allow our feelings to overtake us in the early stages of our relationships and we actually become obsessed. These feelings of ecstasy may actually lead us into passion, which is an object of extravagant short-lived fervor. These feelings of love, misrepresented as love, are usually associated to enthusiastic passion, in temporary admiration. Many times it is due to this infatuated state that people become hurt because they are unable to control their emotional feelings.

The feelings associated with infatuation are more common among adolescents and youngsters. There are plenty of young women who are so taken by their feelings, and their hormones, that they give themselves away prematurely. They then wonder, and seek to answer the question

Dear Poetess Chantal Emmenis, Please accept my congratulations for sharing this verse among us, keep pouring more poems, May God bless,

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting.  Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Hi Chantal,

My approach to appreciate a poem is very straight forward, sometimes, this may go wrong as well, it is our identity of our poetic mind and attitude brings out this kind of same wave-length in my review of your poem, many thanks for your reply, much love and regards to you,

Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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