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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Cherie Sumner's Poem “ Sensual Tree”

POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Cherie Sumner's Poem “ Sensual Tree”

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POET'S PEN:
WILLIAMS MAVELI writes
on Cherie Sumner's Poem
“Sensual Tree”

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  • Sensual Tree
  • BY
  • Poetess Cherie Sumner

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I am complicated,
Many facets of me
Twists and contortions 
I am a sensual tree
Culminated experiences
Make me believe
Deep rooted fears
Affect my sexuality

(Firstly, let me congratulate honorable Poetess Cherie Sumner for posting such a beautiful poem with a lovely title, I love the title and the image, marvelous, this depicts the beauty of God’s own creation, you are the only poetess with the power and boldness in expressing the sexuality of female body, excellent, my applause for sharing this verse to us. Personality is real love and if it is connected with sex, this is an added attraction, another feather on the Poetess Cherie Sumner’s cap)

I stretch out to the left
And I see evil’s dark face
I reach out to the right
For a touch of sweet grace
My heart branches out in the middle
To learn and grow
Embarking on sensuality’s
Brazen show

(Sadly, the signals that allow men and women to find love and lust by  pleasing them are scrambled by the sexual insecurity initiated by the concept of beauty thinking. A woman who is self-conscious cannot relax to let her sensuality come into play. If she is hungry she will be in a tense.mood,  If she is "done up" she will be on the alert for her reflection in his eyes. If she is ashamed of her body, its movement will be stilled. If she does not feel entitled to claim attention, she will not demand that space to shine in. If his field of vision has been boxed in by "beauty"--a box continually shrinking--he simply will not see her, his real love, standing right before him.)

I need your understanding,
A nurturing hand
To rid my forest of confusion
From the land
Am I safe to bloom in passion,
Abundantly?
Shedding insecurity's leaves
To be your sensual tree

(The human body is the best work of art forever made by the creator.  Bodily attractiveness is the measure to which a person's physical features are considered aesthetically pleasing or beautiful, . The term often implies sexual attractiveness or desirability, but can also be distinct from the two. There are many factors which influence one female attraction to a  male, with physical aspects being one of them. Physical attraction itself includes universal perceptions common to all human cultures, as well as aspects that are culturally and socially  dependent, along with individual subjective preferences)

Feeling excited, stimulated, and aroused by the body is often associated with the people around us, even if they are not the cause.Those in the high-fear condition did show, significantly more desire to kiss, nurture and love the human body, there is nothing shame on that,sure,  it is a beauty gift from God.

I totally agree with what POET TONY TAYLOR has remarked as the word embarking adapted in this verses is such an outstanding word choice for a write around a tree. Poetess Cherie Sumner is having  an amazing gift for phrasing and the word choices involved in that proces

The human body is the best work of art. The society indeed has a problem with women exposing their bare breasts, many authors and poets celebrate the human nipples as part of their body, not a sex object on which we should be ashamed of. Female nipples are such a harmless, inoffensive body part and they are similar whether they are of male or female, so why should guys be allowed to expose themselves freely and be acceptably topless in public and in social media when females are not allowed and blamed for the same. Many people mostly wonder why not show off one of God’s many gifts he gives us. Nipples are a beautiful part of the natural female body and society need to love and embrace it, why should the female nipple be censored when it actually has a feeding the baby functionalities?. Female nipples should be celebrated , they are the natural source of life to us all once we are born, however over decades of powerful small mindedness women have been made to feel embarrassed and breasts or nipples have been objectified resulting in a backward or ugly concept.

Dear honorable mother poetess of love, many thanks for sharing this verse to us, my applause,please accept my congratulation and regards, you are a marvelous, honest and sincere poetess,

Regards & Love

WILLIAMS MAVELI

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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting.  Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me

WILLIAMS MAVELI

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Hi Cherie,

Thanks for your support, i shall include your other poems in my column shortly

Love & hugs

Willy

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