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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Flower Girl's Poem: Felt Your Hug

POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Flower Girl's Poem: Felt Your Hug

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  • POET'S PEN:
  • WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on
  • Flower Girl's  Poem
  • " Felt Your Hug "

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  • Felt Your Hug
  • By
  • Flower Girl

late night of darkness I was awakened 
moon was gleaming extra bright 
rain was tapping a song against a window 
wind was furious howling its own rhythm 

could hear them in unison singing my name  

( The above lines are being depicted highly poetical in its scribbling, I love it, Thanks for sharing dear Poetess Flower Girl)

Stepped outside as the moon went romantically dim  
rain turned to a sexy mist of soft passionate kisses  
gentle breeze warmly whirled around me 
instantly felt your warm passionate hug..... 

(The beginning line of this stanza is very elegant and fabulous, I love it. )

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  • BETWEEN THE LINES

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Hugs are by far the most gorgeous thing that can occur to you. When you are hugged you feel good and appealing much safe. Hugs are one of the best ways to define relationships, friendships and love. It is not really a display of affection but rather a portrayal of affection. Relationships need touch and feel for them to grow.

Hugs are the basic while kisses are the next step. Of course, here we are not just talking about the hugs that are pretty intimate leading to the next level of physical intimacy, but talking about the various hugs that explore the beauty of relationships at various levels.

Please accept my congratulations for sharing this above short, but cute verse to us, Expecting many more from your golden pen, dear honorable Poetess Flower Girl.

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting.  Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Honorable Flower Girl,

Also, there is one your featured in my POETS PEN,

Many thanks for your comments and support, I have already started translation of your verses to my mother tongue, Malayalam, I shall let you know once I complete my job, Good luck, Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Miryam Ruth Nah...

Hi Williamsji,

I've been listening a lot to Pastor Joseph Prince preaching on youtube- Pastor Prince mentioned that in Acts 10:44 (44 "While Peter yet spake these words, the Holy Ghost fell on all them which heard the word.") the word used for "fell" in the original language  regarding the Holy Spirit means "love hug". I think God's reminding me He loves me again...! And you all too!!

"~~but talking about the various hugs that explore the beauty of relationships at various levels."

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