POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Jenny Brewer's poem titled " Internet Love "
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- POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
- writes on Jenny Brewer's
- poem titled " Internet Love "
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- Internet Love
- By
- Jenny Brewer
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Here's a story of love
found over the internet.
A story of brave moves
without an ounce of regret.
(Love is not easy to define. How do you avoid confusing it with obsession or lust? Philosophers and psychologists both have attempted to define the theme or concept of love or at least its difference from passion and desire)
Two souls apart
Lovers from distant lands,
who made vast changes,
just to hold hands.
(Falling in love via Internet is very common these days. Love is much more than a risk, but is a risk that one can take and grasp and fall into a dark abyss or dig oneself a hole and only crawl back when you overcome your emotions)
Forfeits were made,
people left behind,
never ever forgotten,
always kept in mind.
(How could someone truly define what iis love? Not even an experienced person can truly grasp or explain love to its truest and deepest meaning)
Plans were made,
big decisions ahead,
off to foreign lands,
exciting new paths to tread.
(Pure love is giving someone the power to break your heart, but trusting them not to)
Two souls connected,
together at last.
Looking to the future
and leaving the past.
(Love concepts are just a never ending story of an open book of experiences. But love does lie in one's heart, where memories are but shadows lingering in your soul)
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Falling in love is very important because no one rises in love or climbs in love. You fall in love, because something of who you are has to go. If not the whole of you, at least a part of you should collapse. Only then there is a love affair. You are willing to destroy a bit of yourself for the sake of the other. It essentially means someone else has become far more important than you. Love is not at all mutual benefit scheme, unfortunately, what most people call “love” is just a mutual benefit scheme.
Dear Poetess Jenny Brewer, please accept my congratulation for sharing such a romantic verse on Internet love, Pour more of your poems to us, May God bless you, wishing you good luck, Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting. Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me
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You my dear Brother Williamji Sir, are gifted beyond belief and excellence in your writes and literary break downs and interpetations of other poets/potess works, appear to breed without labor, as such this piece, by Poetess, Jenny Brewer, who herself, is a powerful writer, judging from her works and an equally, (giving heart),to all she has come to know on this site and it was only fitting, that it would be you, which would further extend the magnitude, of her literary gifts, in your column,("Poet's Pen"). A bridged gap, (as a reader), I looked forward to crossing and enjoying, her many works. I have not been on for a while but will venture into the poem, "Internet Love," before I sign off...
Wonderful write Dear Brother.....Jim
Dear Willy,
Thank you so much for selecting my poem 'Internet Love' for your detailed insight into it's meaning.
I feel honoured that you have chosen my poem as you are an amazing analyser of verse.
I wrote this poem for two friends of mine,who found love over the internet and are now happily living together in Sweden.
Thank you Willy for all your support. x
Jenny x
Honorable Poetess Jenny Brewer,
Thanks for your good remarks, I support poetry and I wish to preach the gospel of literature, though your verses are simple, it is live and thematic, you always use simple narrations, which I like the most,
Keep and nurture Google in your brain and anti virus in your heart, open up all the windows, display all menus, Internet love is amazing,
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI