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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Maaya Dev’s poem, Poetic glance from her anthology of verses "Shimmering Chimes”

POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Maaya Dev’s poem, Poetic glance from  her anthology of verses "Shimmering Chimes”
  • POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on
  • Maaya Dev’s poem, Poetic glance
  • from her anthology of verses titled
  • "Shimmering Chimes”

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POET'S PEN:

WILLIAMSJI M Maaya Dev’s poem," Poetic glance

 " from  her anthology of verses: Shimmering Chimes”

Poetic glance

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Sometimes…

You flash in front

Of my creative eyes

Forcing me to look at you

With surprised gazes

(Imagery is what occurs when honorable  poetess Maaya Dev use words that appeal to our senses)

Sometimes….

I immerse in your

Beautiful thoughts

And miss to grab you

From my poetic glance

 (Poetess Maaya Dev perceives, through her words, a sense idea or image: these images can appeal to all six senses: sight, hearing, touch, smell, taste, and balance)

Sometimes….

I try to pluck

To knit a beautiful poem,

But often fails to bring

Your authentic beauty in it

(Imagery is important in a poem because it is language that allows us to be transported to place, time, and experience, which, if the image is effective, allows us to understand the emotion being conveyed in this fabulous poem)

Oh my words…

You stand in distant

Wobbling and trembling

In a state of stable muteness

The versatile alphabets torn asunder

A heart beat skipped in volatile shadow

(We can only know the world through the senses; we must perceive first and reason second. Imagery is critical to understanding. Imagery refers to the idea that an image, presented on its own, in a poem, has the power to unite the poetess and the reader or listener in the exact impulse or experience that led the poetess to write this poem in the first place)

  • Original Poem written by
  • Poetess Maaya Dev
  • Appreciation review by
  • Poet Williamsji Maveli

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  • BETWEEN THE LINES

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Poetry is an art of scribbling, reading and also reciting, overall entertaining like any other form of literary art of the human language which are being used for its aesthetic qualities in addition to, or instead of its imaginary and semantic content. Generally, it consists of verbal or literary oriented writing works in which language is commonly used in a manner that is felt by its own authors and to the audience or reader to differ from prose.

In poetry, more than in other forms of art of writing, there is an approach that you must wait for inspiration to hit. This seems to be true particularly among beginners, but I have seen this leaning in those who have been writing poetry for years as well. I believe that there are two problems with this attitude. The first is that you can wait a very long time for inspiration to strike. The second is that when it does strike, it is likely to come from your subconscious.

One of the ways to get around the dilemma of waiting is to put yourself in a poetry frame of mind, which can be as easy to do as reading poetry that you like, or sometimes poetry you don't like. Keeping a varied poetry library increases the chances that you will find something to motivate, sometimes inspiration comes from just one phrase and sometimes it is the whole idea. Occasionally I am inspired by the rhythm of the language.

Reading poetry expands poetry horizons. You see the many things that poetry can be written about and it breaks you out of your shell of thought. It also increases the myriad of images and ideas in your subconscious. The number of people who write poetry but don't read it is astounding, and you can usually tell who they are when you read their work.

Honorable Poetess Maaya Dev’s poems in her collection " Shimmering Chimes "are marvelous, hence invites applause from her most valuable readers. Perhaps the most significant element of her verses can be summarized as implied meaning and internal flow of rhythm.

Dear honorable Poetess Maaya Dev, please accept my congratulations for releasing an anthology of your marvelous  titled “ Shimmering Chimes “ poems on vivid themes to us, keep writing more and more, may God bless your golden pen, you are most welcome to our COSMO poetry family

Regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting.  Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Maaya Dev

Thanks for such an enthralling, mesmerising, heart - warming review of a poem ' Poetic Glance' from Shimmering chimes by prolific writer/poet, lover and promoter of poetry Williamsji Maveli. Am feeling at cloud nine with the wonders of all kind supports, encouragement, wishes provided through such beautiful gesture. Deeply humbled and honoured and highly indebted to you.

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Honorable Poetess Maaya Dev,

You are most welcome to this wonderful  family poetry site, COSMOFUNNEL, keep pouring more of your fabulous poems,good luck

Regards

Williamsji Maveli

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