POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Piusha Singh's "MAGNETIZING RIMS"

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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on  Piusha Singh's  "MAGNETIZING RIMS" posted on 1st May

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"MAGNETIZING RIMS"

Glimpse of two sensual

(A sudden flash in a momentary and transient view, pleasing to the senses, voluptuous in nature, this beginning of the verse is being tied up in an eye-opening, incidental thrilling effect of a poetic illusion from the Poetess pen. Excellent )

flares,dribbling  honey.

( In a sudden signaling effect of lights, falling in drops of sweetness of love)

Always enticing me

(Always in a tempting and persuading ways)

to gaze in thirst .

( looking with much eagerness to feel )

Intoxicating fragrance

(Stimulating and enthralling smell)

from your luscious flares,

(very sweet and delicious effects)

invigorating  scattered

(strengthening with much energy)

memories of succulent 

(Reminiscence of juicy, tasteful experiemce )

desires of  heavenly fruits ,

(A liking of celestial fruits of love)

brewing deep in me.

( To prepare a fermented liquor from malt )

Wish this ambrosia deep

( the heavy food of the God's meal )

on cheeks sucking .

(Pleasurably licking)

Crushing my lips,

( pressing on the soft lips )

asphyxiating and

(a substance that produce to suffocate)

instilling the lost vigor.

(digging ideas into minds to regain strength)

Place those fiery brims

(Passionate, flaming and hot till the border line)

all over my frame,

(frames of love)

dampening  in lust.

(weakening in the sensual desires)

Conquering my silence,

( defeating the silence )

invoke the dormant

( to call upon the sleeping )

ravenous beast within.

(voracious and a brutal companion)

Feeling my neck,

(feeling of the soft bodily pleasure)

mark me as yours

( to make as same as yours )

till relishing the blood .

( to get pleasure out of )

Mellowly drink my

( full-flavored because of ripeness )

wine , disseminating

slowly into  the claret.

(Red Bordeaux wine )

Initiate galvanizing volts ,

( giving shock into actions to the units of electrical vibrations)

ripening me in

( to make comfortable to eat) 

 your savory sap.

( flourish herb, to squeeze and get the juice)

Tickling me softly

(tickling one's ribs to excite one greatly)

on my back, drawing

maps of  love,

with your pout

(to push out the lips in sullen displeasure )

on  my softest axis.

(the imaginary line )

Seeking all unknown

bliss in your fiery lips  .

( a passionate and voluptuous writing in a charismatic and mesmerized style of poetic instincts)

Mesmerize  me to kindle

(the general state of consciousness considered independently of particular sensations, thoughts)

the perpetual blaze ,by

(the functional  power of perceiving by a touch)

 your magnetizing rims.

(Down-to-earth imaginative of the dreams which first seen impossible and improbable is becoming a source of love and lust)

Awaiting your advent

(Awaiting for a sensation which is  not connected with sight, hearing, taste, or smell)

in my castle in the air

(a particular sensation of this kind: a feeling of warmth; a feeling of a consciousness or vague awareness: a feeling mixed with  superiority in the prime thoughts on this poem.  A enigmatic and powerful verse, dear Poetess PiushaSingh. Thanks for sharing this verse with us.

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There's nothing quite as remarkable and unforgettable as the exchange of an amazing kiss. The meeting of lips can evoke such a myriad of emotions and communicate your desires in a way that nothing else can quite compare. Even better, when you've got the skills, your lips become a weapon in the war of passion and lust. If you're ready to tease and torture your love to a passionate exchange of heavy lip-locking, it all makes many wonders in everyone's life.

BY

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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