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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Piusha Singh's Poem "When you touched my thoughts"

POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Piusha Singh's  Poem "When you touched my thoughts"

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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on  Piusha Singh's  poem " When you touched my thoughts" posted on 16th June

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Poem – "When you touched my thoughts" by Poetess Piusha Singh

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Reverberated in euphoria ,

(Resounding or echoing, with great t respect, love  and admiration)

when you touched my thoughts.

(when someone advise on certain situations in life)

Golden verses scribbled in my

(Poetic or mild ways of consolation on painful incidents to someone's heart, without expecting anything in return)

heart's deep chambers, again

(When the heart chambers are filled with severe pain and agony's of life)

evoking unbound thoughts .

( Bringing into thoughts of relief and belief )

Soaked in this prudent reverie,

(Day dreaming evoking dreamy thoughts of affection and love along with music therapy)

as an indiscreet  naive sage .

(Rash  or thoughtless instincts in life.  Naive realism describes people's tendency to believe that they perceive the social world “as it is”)

Bowed to a window to the world

( A very nice expression adopted by the Poetess )

of obscured  reflexes of thy love.

( Love is not only by body pleasure, but also through mind or soul. The Poetess is very true in stating this concept of love)

In concrete persuasion to this sense

( The strong pillars of love make persuasion of the senses of a person who is suffering a depression)

of  cerebral fondness breeding steadily. 

( Pertaining to the human brain's likes and dislikes)

Captivated your thoughts into

( Thoughts are golden moments in our life)

my verses, strengthening core

(Poetic implications brings relief of  mental pain )

within a frail frame of yesterday.

( Yesterday may hunt you, leave it aside )

your untamed, verses showered

( The shower of verses makes the other end happy and much delighted, true)

into the infinite thoughts of unknown

( The unknown is always a third person, who is infinite or someone who is possessing love without any limits or blocking, beyond the borders )

realms of my enduring realities.

( Royal jurisdiction or unknown kingdom, space of  love to reduce the suffering calamities in life. This is a great of poem shared with us dear Poetess Piusha Singh. My love and applause to you)

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Naive realism describes people's inclination to believe that they observe the social world “as it is" and as objective reality—rather than as a subjective creation and understanding of reality. This belief that one's perceptions are realistic, impartial interpretations of the social world has two important implications. First, that other, rational people will have similar perceptions as oneself. Second, that other people who have different perceptions from oneself must be uninformed, not privy to the same information as oneself, irrational, or biased. One of psychology's fundamental lessons is that perception is a subjective construction of the world rather than a direct representation of objective reality. That is, people's beliefs and perceptions are a function of both the objective properties of the world and the psychological processes that translate those objective features into psychologically experienced features. Congrats dear Poetess Piusha Singh for sharing your alluring verse of love to COSMO viewers. The floating image attached to the poem is fabulous. Love and regards

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting.  Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me

– WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

   williamsji@yahoo.com

   Posted on 17th June, Indian Time @ 1048 am hours

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Nardine Sanderson

A beautiful write, from an adoring soul, miss Piusha Singh, one of my most loved writers, poetess, congratulations on sweetheart on your outstanding write " when you touched my thoughts" , and to sir williamsji, for bringing your beauty into the light here on Poets Pen, much love and admiration to you both, nardine Sanderson xx

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piusha singh

Thnxxx a million sweet Nardine .I am an ardent fan of your writings...

Love you

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Dear Nardine,

Many thanks on your wonderful comments on Piusha's Poem. Like you, she too  is a talented Poetess in COSMO. My appreciation for your support on my POET' S PEN. I am really happy to see you post many poems within a day.

Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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piusha singh

Hi Dear William, where to start and where to end.words are less when I start to think about you.You are such an inspirational force in my life.Whenever I was in my low phases you encouraged .eBay to blow out.Thnxxx friend...You are a talent house...

Love

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Thanks dear Piusha Singh & Nardine Sanderson for the appreciation of my column, POET'S PEN

WILLIAMSJI

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Piusha Singh,

There is no where to start and no where to end. My life flows like a slow river of emotions. It is very difficult to understand the heavy flow beneath the surface of the stream. Thanks

Good luck

Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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