POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Roze Maria's Poem “Death is all I see..”

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POET'S PEN:
WILLIAMS MAVELI writes
on Roze Maria’s Poem
“Death is all I see..”

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• Death is all I see
• By Poetess Roze Maria

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death is all i see

beautiful and magnificent  

death is all i see

he takes my pain away

he sees through my soul

death is all i see

someday we will meet

but until then i will watch  

silently, wishing to be so close

-By Poetess Roze Maria

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BETWEEN THE LINES

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Your poem is simple to read and understand, the subject of death is a universal theme for all humans,hence I wish ti highlight the significance of birth and death of all who are born to live, die in this world.

Depression means feelings of severe despondency and dejection. Fear on death and its self related doubts creeps in and that swiftly leads to a heavy depression among youngsters, Depression is also linked with melancholy, misery, sadness, sorrow and gloominess. The best remedy is mediation or involving in prayers.

Roze Maria’s short poem speaks on the after effects of this kind of depression.

Depression is a state of low mood and aversion to activity that can affect a person's thoughts, behaviour, feelings and sense of well –being. People with depressed mood can feel sad, anxious ,empty, hopeless, helpless, worthless, guilty, irritable, ashamed or restless, They may lose interest in activities that were once pleasurable, experience loss of appetite or overeating, have problems concentrating, remembering details or making decisions, and may contemplate, attempt or commit suicide, excessive sleeping , aches, pains, digestive problems or reduced energy may also be present. Depressed mood is a feature of some psychiatric syndromes such as major or minor depressive disorders, but it may also be a normal reaction to life events such as grief, a symptom of some bodily ailments or a side effect of some drugs and medical treatments.

Dear Poetess Roze Maria, please accept my congratulations for depicting a life situation through your above poem, keep writing more and more.

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting.  Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me

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