STORY LINE BY WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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How to Write a Short Story, a Screen play or a novel? Do you want to be a screen play writer, a novelist? Learn about the types of fiction writing whether for Print media, web site or for movies.

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Williamsji Maveli writes in a new column exclusively on stories posted in Cosmofunnel with a view to  discuss on various issues of story writing, screen writing etc. From where story ideas comes, plus an incredibly simple way to improve your imagination and your writing. The Column will commence effectively from Monday, 26th May and will continue to  cover all related issues and debates on story writing, screen writing whenever any situation arise from the inputs of COSMO or from any other inspirations from the author himself. The author was an Assistant  screen play writer for many TV projects based in UAE  during year 1980's  and currently he is involved in screen writing for short films based in Cochin.

- WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Author can be reached by email : williamsji@yahoo.com

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• Start-Up

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• Author of Story: Piusha Singh
• Title of Story:  An Escort
• Date of posting: 22nd May
• No of votes: 2
• No of views: 361
• No Comments: 4

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What is a story? Every human being is carrying a story of his or her own and each and every story has a beginning, middle, and end. It may be summarized as the record of how some imaginary person writes on life. But the secret to successfully getting a short story written or fulfilled  is to add something special to your style of story telling or the way it is being told or carried to the readers or audience as appropriate.

While there are no hard and fast rules for creating a great short story, it depends purely on the writers wish how to start with a word, a sentence or a paragraph for a short story or a page for a novel. Identify the heart  of your story. Explore your motivations; determine what you want your story to do, then stick to your central part of the message involved in it.  An effective story will be attractive by its use of desire and danger to manipulate human tension among readers. That is to to say, it poises them for action,then relaxes the, according to a planned pattern. Readers look into the stories because they find a thrill to read and to follow the flow of tension and emotions stimulating and pleasurable.

The start-up or the beginning of Piusha Singh's story is excellent through her superb style with a nice beginning " Liza sat listening to the country music , sipping wine, gazing into the starry sky, on an old rugged couch. Submerged deeply in vague thoughts ,she whispered sighing deeply ,."I wish to be a bird".Phone rang,"Liza, come down quickly, clients are waiting" a rude voice at the other end of the receiver "

Keep a different Eye

See life differently. A unique observation from your mind can provide the most compelling, focused experience of the central story. Just be careful that you don’t unintentionally give the story to a non-essential character. Narrating the story line through a character that is not central to the action is a common mistake many new authors make, often with confusing or complicated results. In today's case study, I take up the story written and posted  by our favorite author Piusha Singh titled as "An Escort" . The story revolves around the life of Liza and her job in the role of a prostitute.Piusha Singh narrates about the character, but the introduction is not that much strong as the quoted lines from her story reveals readers should get into the character easily without a narration This is not happening in this story.

Liza is an escort girl since age 17 ,she joined prostitution to
meet her college expenses .She  met many known faces from various walks of  life ,in 5 years as an escort.Many times she was just seen as an erotic object .Slapped,boxed,kicked ,raped and thrown out of car

When you write, you should never think initially who is going to read the story and do not wind up the story all on a sudden due to any reason. Sleep for some time with your story, develop its different situations in the most realistic way and style.Poetry or story or any form of literature needs to be taken up with utmost care and proper scrutiny.

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BY

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

williamsji@yahoo.com