STORY LINE BY WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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STORY WRITER : Piusha Singh

STORY : AMORE

Date of posting: 29th May

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How to Write a Short Story, a Screen play or a novel? Do you want to be a screen play writer, a novelist? Learn about the types of fiction writing whether for Print media, web site or for movies.

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Williamsji Maveli writes in a new column exclusively on stories posted in Cosmofunnel with a view to  discuss on various issues of story writing, screen writing etc. From where story ideas comes, plus an incredibly simple way to improve your imagination and your writing. The Column will feature and highlight the significant part of story telling or narration and will continue to  cover all related issues and debates on story writing, screen writing whenever any situation arise from the inputs of COSMO or from any other inspirations from the author himself. The author was an Assistant  screen play writer for many TV projects based in UAE  during year 1980's  and currently he is involved in screen writing for short films based in Cochin.

What is a story? Every human being is carrying a story of his or her own and each and every story has a beginning, middle, and end. It may be summarized as the record of how some imaginary person writes on life. But the secret to successfully getting a short story written or fulfilled is to add something special to your style of storytelling or the way it is being told or carried to the readers or audience as appropriate.

- WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Writer williamsji can be reached by email : williamsji@yahoo.com

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Piusha Singh writes a story titled as " AMORE   " which is being presented in an exceptional narrative style

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While there are no hard and fast rules for creating a great short story, it depends purely on the writers wish how to start with a word, a sentence or a paragraph for a short story or a page for a novel.

ABOUT NARRATION OF A STORY

A narration of a story is a connectivity of events, presented to a reader or listener in a sequence of written statements or spoken words of dialogues. Narrative story  can be organized in a number of thematic and or formal stylistic categories of non-fiction : fictionalized  paragraphs  of  events  or incidents  The word derives from the Latin verb "narrare " to tell. Narrative storytelling is used to guide children on proper behavior, cultural history, formation of a communal identity, and values.

Example of a good narration from story writer Piusha Singh

I grabbed my cup of tea for a quick break before taking the new admission awaiting bed in geriatric unit.My colleagues were busy discussing their schedules and work pressure.Reading the news paper is a challenge now a days,time factor is the main key

Narratives also act as living entities through cultural stories, as they are passed on from generation to generation. Because the narrative storytelling is often left without explicit meanings, children act as participants in the storytelling process by delving deeper into the open-ended story and making their own interpretations. The word "story" may be used as a synonym of "narrative". It can also be used to refer to the sequence of events described in a narrative. Narratives may also be nested within other narratives, such as narratives told by an non-reliable narrator or a character typically found in non-fiction genre.

Another good example of narration in between her  story

Next day morning ,  staff reported  Mr.Murphy as very rude, always unhappy about the service. During my rounds ,on conversing with Mr.Murphy,I realized he is totally frustrated and depressed with life . As once he,told me  ,"if i could walk,i will get up and walk out of that door,never turning back." To boost his spirits, Mrs Murphy requested a private room for Mr.Murphy,same was arranged .Many activities were provided to the patients to  divert the mind ,but Mr.Murphy preferred to stay in his room in his special chair ,unruffled.Unlike other patients ,Mr.Murphy never watched T.V nor  heard radio neither shown interest in participating in various sensory stimulating activities held in the unit exclusively for rehabilitation

The back ground of the story.

Nursing implications are not limited to practical skills but also involve individualized emotional support. Many feel that the difference between a good nurse and a nurse is the ability to care and be compassionate during the healing process. A good nurse is someone who can be trusted and relied upon during a person's most vulnerable state. As a Nurse no matter how difficult the patient status might be,it is always fundamental that you put your love for life and the human being before anything else, that will lead you a better place and for sure patients recovery will be better even in the worst case situation that normally takes place in our daily duty

The true difference is in the actual CARE, between the nurses or anyone in the health care profession who actually do what they enjoy doing and those who are in the biz for other reasons.Most of the nurses I have experienced had always  expressed compassion and caring in their communication to those who are heavily sick and bed-ridden.

The Conclusion of the story is excellent

Later,in the afternoon endorsement ,Shelly informed regarding purplish hue in Richard's rt.big toe.Even though ,I was finishing my shift ,my heart didn't permitted me to go, without observing him.I never had this intense feel to meet him and to support him . .I kept wondering ,why an adulation towards a hemiplegic man ,who should be hoisted in and out of the bed.It's not lust but a deep adulation brewing between us.And I can feel the same vibrations from him too.Knocking on his door ,I said "Hi Richard ,could I  check your  right big toe?",.His face lit  up on my sight and vice versa .I sat on the floor,removed his socks,and found an infected nail .Kept his foot on my lap, cleansed the wound and done dressing ."Richard ,I finished my shift now .Going for a for three days break,so meet you after three days .Richard suddenly turn glum,and said,"I will loose you "in his broken speech. "I will miss you too Richard "I replied and walked out of his room. Hardheartedly swiped my card at the exit door,wishing to spend more time with Richard.....

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Hats off to writer Piusha Singh, You brought us to a world of love and care. Please accept my congrats for presenting an excellent story from your own work environment.

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI