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Sunday Musings, featuring Flower Girl's poem titled " Petals Of Luv ", appreciated by Williamsji Maveli

Sunday Musings, featuring Flower Girl's poem titled  " Petals Of Luv ", appreciated by Williamsji Maveli

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  • Sunday Musings, featuring  Flower Girl's poem titled  " Petals Of Luv ", appreciated by Williamsji Maveli

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  • For Sunday Musings Column,
  •  dated 28th June, 2015

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SYNOPSIS: This is my weekend writing column for a review of a poem from a selected author. This Column is being titled as "Sunday Musings" with a view to feature an in-depth analysis of any one of the poems from the previous week's postings, selected by me at random to avoid the elaborate review or comment postings by me in the usual comments column. Poetess Flower Girl's  almost all poems are great success, and have won much appreciations and comments from COSMO viewers.  Hence it was very difficult to choose the best one for my review. However, I shall plan this column in such a way to accommodate almost all style of poems by all poets and poetess of COSMOFUNNEL, which I hope will give more room for encouragement and inspirations to write. The poems selected are purely from my own liking and discretion and has nothing to do with the ratings, voting and favorite aspects. Hope, readers will understand my view point and enjoy my writing. My views and interpretations in this column are purely my own observations, and it has nothing to do with the personal life of the author of the poem. I am eager to read your feed-backs.  The poem which I have taken-up for this Sunday Musings is Flower Girl's " Petals Of Luv "

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  • Petals Of Luv
  • By
  • Flower Girl

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our spirits collide  
in the heavens above  
hear the Angels sing 
"holy is your luv" 

(Affairs are eternal. Separation is another chapter in the relationship. Often, letting go of the old form of the association becomes a lesson in pure love much deeper than any would have learned had the couple stayed together)

sweet song in our hearts  
humming along so happily 
among clouds our luv will reside  
a sacred paradise for just you and I 

(Pure love is an enthusiasm to give without a thought of receiving anything at all in return)

stars shine heavenly beauty  
kissing us with their stunning colors  
a promise that our luv 
will forever be graced with Angelic blessings  

(Love is an accepted kind of contemplation. And contemplation is a mystical kind of love)

where purple roses will always bloom  
sacred place where petals of luv cradle us  
our private garden of Eden we painted with kisses  
where sprits are felt in the rivers flow

(Real Love is caring about the pleasure of another person without wanting anything in return)

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The real love occurs when other people care about our bliss unconditionally. With real love, people are not disappointed or angry when we make our foolish mistakes,  when we don’t do what they want, or even when we inconvenience them personally. Real Love is unconditional.

When I use the word bliss, I do not mean the brief and superficial pleasure that comes from power, sex, and money, or the conditional approval we earn from others when we behave as they want. Nor do I mean the temporary feeling of satisfaction we experience in the absence of immediate conflict or disaster. Real happiness is not the feeling we get from being entertained or making people do what we want. Real happiness is a profound and lasting sense of peace and fulfillment that deeply satisfies and enlarges the soul. It doesn’t go away when circumstances are difficult. It survives and even grows during hardship and struggle.

Honorable Poetess Flower Girl, please accept my congratulations for posting a simple love lyric for us, Awaiting to read more love poems from your golden pen, May God bless.

Regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Shirley Rebstock

I think you chose a beautiful poem to review and honored it with your comments. 

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Hi Cherie,

I was late to read your comments on the above, I love to write appreciation reviews via my column POET'S PEN, I shall try my level best to retain this column, also will involve more poets this year

Love & Hugs

Willy

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