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Tale of Hope

Tale of Hope

Chapter 1

Little feet cautiously descended from the top bunk, the wooden ladder creaking softly under the girl's weight. Outside, dawn was breaking, painting the sky in delicate hues of pink and gold, casting long shadows over the bedroom floor where forgotten toys lay from the night before.
Trying not to make a sound with her teaspoon, Alice took a careful sip of hot tea and glanced around the room. Her mother, a woman she adored and feared at the same time, still slept wrapped in blankets that faintly smelled of stale cigarettes and yesterday's disappointments. The promise Alice had made to herself the previous night weighed heavily on her heart as she checked the time on the kitchen clock — it was time for her to leave.
Setting down her teacup carefully, she wiped crumbs from a hastily made sandwich and swiftly gathered the scattered letters from the table. Stuffing them into her school bag, Alice slipped on her second shoe, stealing a final glance at her sleeping mother. With a deep breath, she readied herself for the day ahead.
The air outside was fresh and clear, a stark contrast to the stale atmosphere of her home. The world seemed slowly awakening.
"Alright, here we go," Alice whispered to herself, her voice carrying a mix of determination and hope. Today was another day where she had to handle tasks far beyond her years.
With these thoughts propelling her forward, she set off along the familiar path, delivering the letters collected the previous evening from Mr. Nicolas, a neighbor willing to share his postal duties to steal a few extra hours of sleep.
Alice walked quickly, her small feet making soft crunching sounds on the gravel path. She reached the first house on her route and slipped the letters into the mailbox with practiced ease. The quiet neighborhood seemed to be asleep, much like her mother, and Alice felt a strange connection to the stillness.
As she continued, her mind drifted back to the conversation she had with the mysterious woman yesterday. The woman had promised that if Alice handed over all her mother’s valuables and the little savings they had, she could help Alice’s mother stop drinking. Alice desperately wanted to believe her, but doubt gnawed at her. Could she trust this stranger? She shook her head and tried to focus on the task at hand.
She arrived at Mr. Nicolas's house and gently placed his mail in the box. Mr. Nicolas had been kind enough to give her this small job, understanding more than most about her situation. He often slipped in a few extra coins because of her trouble, which Alice saved carefully. Today, he was already up, which is not usual, leaning against the door frame, a steaming cup of coffee in his hand.
“Morning, Alice,” he greeted with a warm smile, though concern lingered in his eyes. “You’re up even early again.”
“Morning, Mr. Nicolas,” Alice replied, forcing a cheerful tone. “Just trying to get everything done before school.”
He nodded, taking a sip of his coffee. “You’re doing a great job, kiddo. Here, I’ve got something for you.” He handed her a small envelope. Inside, Alice found a few more coins than usual.
“Thank you,” she said, her voice tinged with genuine gratitude. “This helps a lot.”
Mr. Nicolas nodded again, his expression serious. “If you ever need anything more, don’t hesitate to ask, alright?”
Alice smiled and nodded, though she knew better than to burden him further. “I will. Thanks again.”
With the coins safely tucked away, she continued her route. The sky was now a bright, cheerful blue, and the town was beginning to stir. Cars started to move, and the distant sounds of morning routines filled the air.
Alice’s next stop was Mrs. Thompson’s house, a large, old building with a garden that always seemed in bloom. As she approached, Mrs. Thompson was already outside, pruning her roses.
“Good morning, Alice!” Mrs. Thompson called out, her voice as bright as the flowers around her.
“Morning, Mrs. Thompson,” Alice replied, handing over the letters.
“Thank you, dear. How’s your mother?”
Alice hesitated, the question always a painful reminder. “She’s... the same,” she said quietly.
Mrs. Thompson sighed, her face softening with sympathy. “If you ever need a good meal, you’re always welcome at our family dinners, you know that.”
“I know. Thank you,” Alice said, appreciating the offer but determined to handle things on her own.
As she walked away, her thoughts drifted back to the mysterious woman. Despite the doubts, hope flickered in her heart. She had to try something, anything, to help her mother. The memory of her mother before the drinking – happy, vibrant, full of life – was what kept her going.
Finally, with all the letters delivered, Alice reached the bus stop. She arrived just in time, climbing aboard, she found her usual seat by the window and settled in, her mind racing with plans for the day.
School wasn't exactly her favorite place, but it offered a temporary sanctuary where she could disappear for a while and take a breather.
As she sat through the lessons, her mind wandered, consumed by the decision she had to make after school. She doodled in the corners of her notebook, glanced at the clock every few minutes, and tried to focus, but her thoughts kept drifting back to the mysterious woman’s offer. The promise of help for her mother was too tempting to ignore, yet the risk felt enormous.
The final bell rang, and Alice headed to her music lesson, a faint sense of dread and hope mingling in her chest. She went through the motions, her fingers moving over the keys of the piano automatically, the notes blending into a background hum to her racing thoughts. The mysterious woman’s promise echoed in her mind: hand over the valuables, and she would help her mother.
After her lesson, Alice made her way home. She knew what she had to do.
Entering her house, Alice noticed the air as usual was thick with the smell of stale cigarettes, and the heavy curtains were drawn tightly shut, blocking out any hint of the light. The living room was dimly lit by the flickering glow of the television, casting long shadows across the cluttered floor. Empty bottles and crumpled cigarette packs were scattered.
Her mother sat slumped on the couch, her eyes vacant as she stared at the television. She was a shadow of her former self — gaunt and frail, with hollow cheeks and dark circles under her eyes. Her once-vibrant hair hung limply around her face, and her clothes hung loosely on her thin frame. Despite her deteriorated state, there was still a faint echo of the charm she once had, a glimpse of the woman she used to be.
Alice's heart ached as she looked at her mother, remembering the lively, spirited woman she used to be. The house was filled with reminders of better times: a bookshelf overflowing with well-loved books, a framed photograph of her mother laughing, her eyes sparkling with joy, and a guitar leaning against the wall, collecting dust. These relics of the past were painful reminders of the life they had lost.
Alice moved quietly, trying not to disturb her mother, who seemed oblivious to her presence. She made her way to the small bedroom she shared with her mother, where the atmosphere was equally stifling. The bed was unmade, clothes were strewn about, and the small dresser was cluttered with knick-knacks and old photographs. Among the clutter, Alice found the few valuables they had — a necklace, some rings, and the small stash of money hidden away.
Her hands trembled slightly as she placed them in a small bag, the weight of her decision pressing down on her. She glanced around the room, her eyes lingering on a photo of her mother holding a much younger Alice, both of them smiling brightly. It was a stark contrast to the present reality, and it fueled Alice's determination to do whatever it took to bring back that happiness.
As she stepped back into the living room, her mother finally noticed her presence. She turned her head slowly, her eyes dull and unfocused. "Alice? What are you doing?" she asked, her voice a mere whisper.
Alice forced a smile, though her heart was heavy with worry. "Just going see Nataly, Mom. I'll be back soon," she replied softly.
Her mother nodded absently, turning her attention back to the television. Alice felt a pang of sadness as she watched her, but she quickly steeled herself. Taking a deep breath, Alice slipped out of the house, clutching the bag tightly. The air outside was cool, and the sky had turned a soft shade of evening purple. She walked quickly, her heart pounding with each step.
When she reached the meeting place, the mysterious woman was already there, a calm, expectant look on her face. Alice approached her, trying to muster all the courage she had. The woman was tall, with dark hair and piercing blue eyes, dressed in a long coat that seemed out of place in their small town.
“Do you have it?” the woman asked, her voice smooth and reassuring.
Alice hesitated, clutching the bag tightly to her chest. “I have it,” she replied, her voice trembling. “But I need to know — how do I know I can trust you?”
The woman’s smile was gentle but unwavering. “Alice, I understand your doubts. Trust isn’t easily given, especially in your situation. But remember, I found you when you needed someone most.”
Alice’s mind flashed back to their first meeting. It had been just a few days ago, outside the grocery store. Alice was struggling to carry the heavy bags, and the woman appeared out of nowhere, helping her without a word. They had started talking, and somehow, the conversation had turned to Alice’s mother. The woman had listened intently, her eyes filled with understanding and empathy.
“I remember,” Alice said quietly. “But I need to be sure. My mom… she’s all I have.”
The woman nodded. “I promise, Alice. I want to help you. This is a chance for both of you to start anew. Trust me, and I’ll show you the way.”
Alice took a deep breath, her heart pounding. She glanced at the bag one last time before handing it over to the woman. “Okay. I trust you.”
The woman took the bag, her eyes softening with kindness. “Thank you, Alice. You’ve made the right choice. Now, go home. Things will start to change very soon.”
Alice watched as the woman walked away, feeling a strange mix of relief and anxiety. She had taken a leap of faith, and now all she could do was hope it would pay off.
As she walked back home, the weight on her shoulders felt a little lighter. She had done something brave, something for her mother. And for the first time in a long while, she allowed herself to believe that maybe, just maybe, things could get better.

Chapter 2

The next morning, Alice woke up earlier than usual, unable to contain her anticipation for the day her mother might finally return to her old self. Lying in bed, she daydreamed about their future together: traveling, eating their favorite hot dogs (even if they were a bit mediocre), sharing made-up stories, and conversing in their secret language. When Alice was five, her mother had invented a mysterious language for them to use during family gatherings—a playful rebellion against the boring adult conversations. Their eyes would twinkle mischievously, knowing they had pulled off their little prank. Alice adored her mother—the woman who had stormed into her life, filling it with color and joy, yet remained as unpredictable as a storm. But now, everything had changed. The heaviness that had settled over their home, the sadness and anxiety—they were unwelcome neighbors they had to live with.
Today, Alice didn’t need to deliver the mail and could have slept in, but instead, she decided to make breakfast, feeling that today might bring a change.
Careful not to make too much noise with the dishes, Alice prepared breakfast using her grandmother’s recipe. She knew her mother still enjoyed sipping cold coffee with milk in the morning, so Alice brewed a fresh cup of coffee and quietly approached the living room.
The atmosphere seemed slightly lighter, with a sliver of morning light peeking through the curtains. Her mother was already up, sitting on the couch with the TV on, but she looked different today. She wasn’t slumped over in her usual despondency; instead, she sat more upright, her eyes showing a glimmer of alertness.
Alice's heart skipped a beat. Could this be the change she had hoped for? Her mother looked up as she approached, and for the first time in a long while, there was a faint but genuine smile on her face.
"Good morning, sweetie," her mother greeted, her voice clearer than usual. "Is that coffee I smell?"
Alice beamed. "Yes, Mom. I made breakfast too. Your favorite—scrambled eggs and French toast."
Her mother stood up, a bit unsteady but determined. "That sounds wonderful. Let’s eat together."
They sat at the small kitchen table, the aroma of breakfast filling the room. For a moment, it felt like old times. They chatted about Alice's school, her friends, and even planned to visit the market after school to buy ingredients for dinner. Alice felt her heart swell with hope and happiness. Maybe the mysterious woman’s promise was coming true.
The next few days passed in a blur of cautious optimism. Each morning, Alice woke with the same anticipation, the same fluttering hope in her heart. Her mother, for her part, seemed to come alive a little more each day.
On Tuesday, Alice woke to find her mother not only awake but already dressed and brushing her hair in front of the bathroom mirror.
"Morning, Alice," her mother greeted warmly. "I thought we could go to the library after school today. You always used to love that."
Alice's eyes widened in surprise. "I'd love that, Mom! I've been wanting to borrow a new book for a while now."
Her mother smiled, and for a brief moment, it was like looking at the woman she used to be. They had breakfast together, discussing which books they might find, and Alice headed off to school with a lightness in her step that she hadn't felt in ages.
On Wednesday, Alice found her mother tidying up the house. The empty bottles were gone, the ashtrays cleaned out, and sunlight flooded into the room.
"I thought it was time for a change," her mother explained, a little out of breath but smiling nonetheless. "A fresh start."
Alice could hardly believe her eyes. "It looks wonderful, Mom. Really."
That evening, they cooked dinner together for the first time in months. Alice chopped vegetables while her mother hummed a tune she hadn't heard in a long time. They made a simple pasta dish, but it tasted like a feast. They laughed and talked, and for the first time in what felt like forever, Alice went to bed feeling like everything was going to be okay.
Thursday brought more good news. Her mother had applied for a few jobs and was starting to get some responses. She even had an interview lined up for the following week.
"I know it's just a start," her mother said, excitement and nervousness mingling in her voice. "But it's something."
Alice hugged her tightly. "I'm so proud of you, Mom."
That day at school, Alice found it hard to concentrate. Her thoughts kept drifting back to the wonderful changes at home. She was eager for the day to end so she could go back and be with her mother. The bell rang, signaling the end of the school day, and Alice practically ran all the way home.
But as she approached the house, her heart began to sink. The front door was ajar, and a sense of dread hung heavy in the air. She stepped inside cautiously, her stomach churning with fear.
The living room was a mess. Bottles littered the floor, the smell of alcohol sharp and unmistakable. Her mother lay unconscious on the floor, surrounded by broken glass and crumpled papers. Alice's heart pounded in her chest as she rushed to her mother's side.
"Mom! Mom, wake up!" she cried, gently shaking her.
Her mother's eyes fluttered open, but they held no recognition. She mumbled something unintelligible, her breath heavy with the smell of booze. Tears welled up in Alice's eyes as she looked around, her gaze falling on an unopened letter lying next to her mother. She picked it up with trembling hands and read the contents: a job rejection. Her mother had been turned down again.
Alice's shoulders slumped as she realized the terrible truth. Her mother's brief recovery had been driven by hope, by the prospect of getting a job and turning her life around. But with the rejection came despair, and the cycle had started all over again.
She helped her mother up, guiding her to the couch and covering her with a blanket. Her mother mumbled incoherently before falling into a restless sleep. Alice stood there for a long moment, staring at the woman who had once been her hero. The tears came then, hot and unstoppable, streaming down her face as she realized how desperately she had wanted to believe in a miracle.
Once she had calmed down, Alice made her way next door to Mrs. Thompson's house. She knocked on the door, her heart heavy with the burden she carried. Mrs. Thompson answered almost immediately, taking one look at Alice's tear-streaked face and pulling her into a comforting hug.
"Oh, Alice, what's happened?" she asked, leading her inside and settling her on the couch.
Between sobs, Alice told her everything. She spoke of the mysterious woman, the promise of help, the brief days of hope, and the crushing disappointment of finding her mother drunk again. Mrs. Thompson listened quietly, her expression a mix of sympathy and sadness.
When Alice had finished, Mrs. Thompson took her hands in hers. "Alice, I'm so sorry you've had to go through this. It's not fair for someone your age to bear such a burden."
Alice nodded, wiping her tears with the back of her hand. "I just wanted her to be better. I thought... I thought I could help."
Mrs. Thompson sighed, squeezing her hands gently. "Sometimes, no matter how much we want to help someone, they have to want to help themselves. But that doesn't mean you've failed. You've done more than anyone could expect. And your mother... she loves you, even if she can't show it right now."
Alice looked up at her, the words sinking in slowly. "Do you think... do you think she can ever get better?"
Mrs. Thompson hesitated, choosing her words carefully. "It's possible, Alice. But it's a hard road, and she'll need a lot of support. Professional help, too. And she'll have to want it for herself."
Alice nodded again, a small seed of determination taking root in her heart. "I understand. Thank you, Mrs. Thompson."
"You're always welcome here, Alice."
As Alice made her way back home, she felt a strange mix of sadness and resolve. The hope she had clung to so desperately was gone, replaced by a more realistic understanding of her mother's situation. But she knew she couldn't give up.
She walked into the house and found her mother still asleep on the couch. The room was dark, the curtains once again drawn tight. Alice moved quietly, tidying up the bottles and broken glass, straightening the room as best she could. She found the small stash of money she had hidden away and tucked it back into its place. It wasn't much, but it was all they had.
Sitting down at the kitchen table, Alice wrote a letter to herself, a promise to keep trying, to keep hoping, even if the road ahead was uncertain. She folded the letter carefully and placed it in her school bag, a reminder of the resolve she had found in the darkest moment.
As she prepared for bed, Alice glanced one last time at her mother, her heart aching with love and worry.
The next day, Alice woke with a new determination. She went about her morning routine, making breakfast and getting ready for school. Her mother was still asleep, but Alice left a note on the table: "I love you, Mom. I'll see you after school."

Chapter 3

Two days had passed since Alice's mother collapsed in a haze of alcohol and despair. Alice spent her days tending to her, ensuring she was as comfortable as possible while struggling to keep up with her schoolwork and other responsibilities.
Alice's mother barely left her bed, consumed by the darkness of her addiction and overwhelming guilt. She lay there, staring at the ceiling, haunted by memories of happier times and the stark realization of how far she had fallen. The shame she felt for what she had become and what she had put Alice through gnawed at her constantly.
One morning, as Alice was getting ready for school, she decided she couldn't handle this alone anymore. She needed help, professional help, for her mother. And there was only one person she could think of: Mrs. Thompson.
With a heavy heart and a resolve that was growing stronger by the minute, Alice approached Mrs. Thompson’s door. She knocked softly, and within moments, the door opened to reveal the warm, comforting presence of Mrs. Thompson.
"Alice, dear, come in," Mrs. Thompson said, her voice full of concern. "What's the matter?"
Alice stepped inside, her eyes welling up with tears. "It's my mom. She's not doing well, and I don't know what to do anymore. You told me she needs professional help, but I do not know where should I start"
Mrs. Thompson nodded, her expression serious. "I’ve been worried about her too, Alice. Let’s sit down and talk about this. We’ll figure something out together."
They sat at Mrs. Thompson’s kitchen table, the room filled with the comforting scent of freshly baked cookies. Alicre started to talk and Mrs. Thompson listened intently, her heart aching for the young girl and her troubled mother. When Alice finished, Mrs. Thompson reached out and gently squeezed her hand. "Alice, you've been incredibly brave. I’m so proud of you for trying to help your mother. We will get her the help she needs. But first, I need to talk to her."
Alice nodded, her eyes filled with hope. "Thank you, Mrs. Thompson. I don’t know what I’d do without you."
Mrs. Thompson hugged her tightly. "You’re never alone, Alice. I’ll speak with you mom, I promise."
On the next day, together, they walked to Alice’s house. The closer they got, the more anxious Alice felt. She had no idea how her mother would react to Mrs. Thompson’s visit, but she knew it was necessary.
Inside the house, the atmosphere was as heavy as ever. Mrs. Thompson followed Alice to the bedroom, where her mother lay, staring blankly at the ceiling. She barely acknowledged their presence as they entered the room.
"Hope," Mrs. Thompson said softly, sitting down on the edge of the bed. "It’s me, Margaret. We need to talk."
Hope turned her head slightly, her eyes dull and lifeless. "Margaret? What are you doing here?"
"I’m here because Alice asked for my help," Mrs. Thompson replied gently. "She’s worried about you, Hope. We all are."
Hope closed her eyes, a tear slipping down her cheek. "I’ve failed her, Margaret. I’ve failed my little girl."
Mrs. Thompson reached out and took Hope’s hand in hers. "Hope, listen to me. You haven’t failed her. You’re struggling, yes, but you can get better. You can still be the mother she needs."
Hope shook her head, her voice barely above a whisper. "You don’t understand. I found out the other day that our valuables and the little money we had were gone. I thought in my drunken state I had pawned them all and spent the money. I was so scared for Alice’s future. That’s why I tried to find a job, to turn things around. But after getting rejected again and again, I just couldn’t handle it. I broke down."
Mrs. Thompson replied. "No, that was not you. Alice took it, she was trying to help and was tricked"
Hope’s eyes filled with confusion and tears. "What do you mean? Who tricked Alice? What are you talking about?"
Mrs. Thompson took a deep breath, knowing how delicate this conversation was. "There was a woman who came to her a few weeks ago. Alice told me about her. This woman convinced Alice to give her your jewelry and money, saying it was the only way to make you stop drinking."
Hope's face contorted with a mix of shock and guilt. "Alice did that? She gave away everything we had because of me?"
"Yes, Hope," Mrs. Thompson said softly. "She did it out of love and desperation. She thought it was the only way to save you. She was tricked by someone who took advantage of her love for you."
Hope covered her face with her hands, sobbing uncontrollably. "My poor baby... I’ve put her through so much. How could I have let this happen?"
Mrs. Thompson wrapped her arms around Hope, holding her tightly. "You didn’t let it happen, Hope. You’re sick, and you need help. But you have to believe that you can get better. For you. For Alice. She needs you to be strong. She needs you to believe in yourself as much as she believes in you."
Hope’s tears flowed freely now, and she began to sob. "I want to believe it too. I want to get better. But it’s so hard."
"I know it is," Mrs. Thompson replied, her voice full of compassion. "We’ll find the help you need. And Alice and I will be with you every step of the way."
As Hope cried, releasing the pent-up anguish and guilt, Alice stood at the doorway, watching the exchange with a mixture of relief and apprehension. She had never seen her mother so vulnerable, so open. It scared her, but it also gave her a glimmer of hope.
Mrs. Thompson stayed with Hope for a long time, talking softly, reassuring her, and promising that they would get through this together. Alice joined them, sitting beside her mother, holding her hand, and silently conveying her unwavering love and support.
By the end of the conversation, Hope agreed to seek professional help. Mrs. Thompson promised to help find the right resources and support for her recovery. They all knew it would be a long and difficult journey.
As they prepared to leave, Mrs. Thompson turned to Alice. "You’ve done an incredible thing today, Alice. Your mother is going to need you more than ever now. But remember, you don’t need to do that alone, okay?"
Alice nodded, her heart full of a new, fragile hope. "Thank you, Mrs. Thompson. I’ll do everything I can to help her."
They left the room, giving Hope some time to rest and reflect. Alice knew the road ahead would be tough, but she also knew that they had taken the first crucial step towards healing. As Alice closed the door behind her, she glanced back at her mother one last time. Hope was lying in bed, staring at the ceiling, tears still wet on her cheeks.
Mrs. Thompson put an arm around Alice's shoulders. "Let’s take it one day at a time, Alice. We’ll get through this. Let’s go to my place, you will sleep with us, tonight."
Alice nodded and agreed, but her mind was filled with uncertainty. Would her mother truly get better this time? Would the professional help make a difference? The questions swirled in her mind, and for now, there were no clear answers.
They walked back to Mrs. Thompson’s house, the future uncertain and filled with both hope and fear. Alice clung to the belief that things could change, that her mother could find her way back. But deep down, she knew that the outcome was still unknown, and only time would tell if Hope would overcome her demons.
The sun dipped below the horizon, casting long shadows across the quiet street. In the gathering twilight, the line between hope and despair remained blurred, leaving the outcome an open-ended question: If it Hope is enough?
The next morning, Alice returned home after spending the night at Mrs. Thompson's. Despite the warmth and comfort she had felt in Mrs. Thompson's care, her heart remained heavy with a mix of anxiety and cautious hope. She had spent most of the night tossing and turning, her thoughts consumed with worry about her mother.
As she approached the front door, she paused for a moment, taking a deep breath to steel herself for whatever she might find inside. With a trembling hand, she turned the doorknob and pushed the door open.
Stepping inside, Alice immediately sensed something different. She walked through the hallway, her footsteps echoing softly on the wooden floor.
When she reached the living room, she froze, her eyes widening in disbelief.
"Mama?" Alice said, her voice a mixture of surprise and confusion. Tears welled up in Alice's eyes as she took a tentative step forward.

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Bernadete van d...

Hi Nika, big effort in such a long writing. I am wondering what Alice 
saw, and I think it's a positive thing. Maybe Mama turned things around?!
A sequel sometime? Greetings, B

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Nika Garden

What she saw, I leave to your imagination and interpretation. Maybe Hope is on the path to recovery and things will turn out well, or perhaps Alice saw something terrible.

Thank you for reading my story – this is my first short piece, and I’m currently working on a screenplay based on it.

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