Poem -
no fuss and no yelp
i think now, it's an ignorant i've
been
to think that some light source
could bathe me new clean,
whether bulb in the ceiling or
freshly viewed dawn
or the soulfelt white burn that
most others call god
i think now, there is no saving
grace
no higher reason and no ruling
love
just a world largly spinning
indifferent in space
just a world bleak and lonesome
with no gods in place
where no spirit healing or reason
occurs
i think perhaps now we contain till
we burst
and that,
no reached for light source or
human can help
we curl up we die slow
no fuss and no yelp,
M ~
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Hi Marion.... I am not sure on a god par se. I believe that there is something else. But I don't know what. And I don't know if I ever will know. I like to think about things such as magic and faeries and unicorns and spirits and all manner of unearthly things ... because that is what keeps my simple mind sane ...lol.
I am reading the second line as how (ignorant) and not It's an (ignorant). Appologies if I have got it wrong.
So happy to see you have posted this as I was getting worried about you xx
You read it right love as you always do
My star sign is Pisces...I believe passionately and disbelieve passionately...
depending on the tide lol. Thankyou for worrying...super hugs to you xx
i opened upon waking to find a random poem but here this was, and you, first on the page, fate? we are in some ways yin and yang, yet as the dawn approaches this, so well written, will serve as light for me today.
maybe my favorite line
"whether bulb in the ceiling or
freshly viewed dawn
or the soulfelt white burn that
most others call god"
You always leave the lovely comments Mark...you are a kind and generous man ...hugs x
Sad little write ladened with reality.
Nice write.
John
Thankyou truly John x
Word perfect hence the pin etc etc .. x
Thanks Nev...appreciated x
My pleasure.. Always x