Poem -

Three Summers

It was never meant
to be like this ..
It was meant to be
perfect forever ..
And indeed it was,
for three
whole summers ..
Then out of the blue,
she went and she broke it ..

Ā 

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Marion

Very few words here to describe in an 'indifferent voice'....I would say love but I prefer to use... life. Hugs x

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Neville

That'll do nicely Chuck .. More than nicely .. xx

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Being Me

A few words that describe the utter heartbreak of being blindsided spot on. You have a wonderful poetic voice x

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Neville

Shucks .. now aint that the truth x

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sparrowsong

Hello Nev ...

Great write!

Why do men like mushy and gushy?

Would you pass a message to Being Me for me?

If we get to the Moon as it's being built up...

I'm sure you know where I'm going with this...

People overboard?

Thank you for sharing Nev...

Best wishes and blessings my friend...

sparrowsong

Ā 

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Neville

I am sure you can ask her yourself .. but thanks for calling in ..Ā 

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Mark Olcott

three summers of perfection, not a bad run and for the poet, soon more summers to come!

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Neville

Hi Mark please excuse the unforgivably late reply .. I have been extremely preoccupied with work lately .. Just wanted you to know that I truly appreciate the visit .. All Good Things to you & yours ..

NevilleĀ 

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