Poem - 04 April 2024, 17:03 LOVE TAKE OFFER sparrowsong Embedded video for LOVE TAKE OFFER What would you do? Shy away from a hug? Probably... They might be a Wolf in Sheep's Clothing... You will know them? Is your light on? Theirs too bright? Got to go... I'm next... sparrowsong Like 2 Pin it 1 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 751 Rating: Total votes: 2 Tags: Adventure Awareness Freedom Fun Safe Poetry Genre: Elegy Epic Freestyle Topic: Love Listed in: Contest Entries 3 comments
sparrowsong05 April 2024, 16:14 Hello Bernie... I see why your mind would say ominous... It's me... I'm here doing this... While I wait my turn... This Path has an obstacle... I'm at the End in Line... Lines can move slowly... There's choices to be made... Go Right? Go Left? Let God toss you in the Right Direction? Choices... Real funny when we're tossed into the wind... Not really funny with us until we learn to laugh at it too... I have a minute to check my feelings as I pray this time to be in the direction the wind is going... Hold on... You'll set down somewhere... Just don't let go on your own... Things can turn ominous? Thank you... sparrowsong Reply
Marion06 April 2024, 03:59 S...you have nailed this. The underlying theme here for me is the illusion of control. Truth be told we have none x Reply
sparrowsong12 April 2024, 10:48 Hello Marion... Some people make me laugh... I can't help the things I find funny... Like people who believe they're actually in control... They're a Hoot... 😂 Thank you for your kind comment and support... sparrowsong Reply
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Hello Bernie...
I see why your mind would say ominous...
It's me...
I'm here doing this...
While I wait my turn...
This Path has an obstacle...
I'm at the End in Line...
Lines can move slowly...
There's choices to be made...
Go Right?
Go Left?
Let God toss you in the Right Direction?
Choices...
Real funny when we're tossed into the wind...
Not really funny with us until we learn to laugh at it too...
I have a minute to check my feelings as I pray this time to be in the direction the wind is going...
Hold on...
You'll set down somewhere...
Just don't let go on your own...
Things can turn ominous?
Thank you...
sparrowsong
S...you have nailed this. The underlying theme here for me is the illusion of control.
Truth be told we have none x
Hello Marion...
Some people make me laugh...
I can't help the things I find funny...
Like people who believe they're actually in control...
They're a Hoot...
😂
Thank you for your kind comment and support...
sparrowsong