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144,000 SEE FOR YOURSELF

Just Read The Signs

A certain percentage?

A Seal?

The Winds?

The Sky?

The Clouds?

The Quakes?

The Shaking?

Sounds like...

Umm?

You are one?

Nope definitely not?

Doesn't seem like the odds are balanced?

Off balance and we're in a Ball?

Already shifted off its Axis...

​​​​​​Tsunami (Japan)...

Could it affect weather?

Climate?

Did everyone survive?

They're all still with us?

144,000?

In or Out?

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Marion

The one thing that truly bothers me about religion is this idea of a vengeful god...personally I think it produces fear instead of love. I had never heard of these so thanks for sharing a really interesting and well written write S. I'm out lol. I prefer my god to love me not hate me...hugs X

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sparrowsong

Hello Marion...

​​​​​I'm going to draw you out a scenario if I may?

From the view point of a Parent...

If your child wanted to harm another person or their property...

​​​​​​The child is caught by you after the child carried through with a crime...

Are you going to reward your child with a toy or affection?

That's where our differences may be...

I believe that regardless if it's my child or someone else's do the crime do the time?

When people get away with things with no consequences...

We end up in a mess like we're in...

I want a Parent that teaches the right way...

Not let me get away with anything that's wrong...

No one likes to be punished but, it makes for better people in the long run if they learn from their mistakes...

Thank you for your kind comment and support...

sparrowsong

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