Long-suffering is a Storm
Iris of grey courting green, as a wintry, moody sea.ย
Fear pools to the black, yet brazen waves roar a tempest,ย
so I cannot be moored amidst you, but Iย cannot be free.ย
The winds keep bellowing, and I am a careless nymph.ย
Relentless inquietude; Steel-hurling eloquence.ย
How you drown Nereids trying to save them and braid their shimmering strands to yours.
The more I pardon a deluge, the more it surges and gulps me into the chill.
Limbs punctured by ice, I am too weary to swim to shore.ย
Truth-quavering chrysalis, liminal, held firm within my heart.
Is Maera to be reborn in seafoam of the unkissed,ย
when I float upon its soft melancholy?ย
"When is my time?" I keep begging the quiescence,ย
and the erratic sea glowers green.
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Comments
Oh brilliantly written! You deserve a sky full of stars for this! A beautiful depiction of something so dangerous and ugly. I love it, of course x
Thank you so much. I always love your comments and encouragement. Lovely to receive one again <3
Always a pleasure to read your work. You are truly talented.ย
Ian :) Thank you very much. That is very motivating for me to hear, especially because I also admire your work! Glad to be writing again and posting here.
This is beautiful poetry ๐นย
Thank you Shirley ๐ฅฐ I was feeling a bit unsure about it at first
Nooo it's beautifully poetic with truly wonderful imagery mesmerising, with a magical ending. ๐นย
Wow thanks!๐
Sad, dangerous and beautifully expressed, Brittany! I wish the Nymph could break free and find some peace somewhere else. There is always a way, the Nymph is stronger than she thinks she is.ย
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I really appreciate that B <3
The nymph has now found some peace and lots of love in new waters :)
This reads like a classic... love it x
Thank you Marion! Love to hear that you enjoyed it ^_^
This poem has a classic. Feel to it.ย Greek myths, tales of heroes and demi gods.ย I thought the imagery was very well crafted and depicted. Enjoyed susan
Thank you for your kind comment, and I'm so glad you enjoyed the read Susan โค๏ธ๐
Well well
ย ย ย I donโt know half the words you used in the poemย
ย but Iโm sure they were perfect for the poemย
Iโm learningย
sophisticationย
in poetryย
I only knowย
Simplicationย
good workย
Thank you Popop Rifici!โค๏ธ๐ Simple poems can be so beautiful too! Some of my favorite poems are simple and understatedย
really cool write!............................................................................................Jim
Thanks Jim! ๐๐
Hello Brittany, I loved your poem, thanks ๐ for reuniting me with my interest in poetryโฆ
Thank you Adi. It's such a great outlet ๐
Beautiful imagery, fantastic flow of words ๐๐โฎ๏ธ๐
Thank you Wayne, I really appreciate that. I worked hard on this one๐
You can tell plenty of effort went into that piece, well done โฎ๏ธ๐