Poem -
Stars 4
I wrote to the sea
On a weekend away from you.
You were like the sun.
I missed you when I was gone.
Or star, rather, it was!
You were like a minor star
That shines so far
From me it hurt.
Yes, I remember it now
Like it was November, me a
Typical mess, you, respectfully sexy.
All the gray language had gone.
All there was was light.
My return brought new poetry.
There was even music for a while.
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Comments
Your emotion is beautiful, passionate for sure with a touch of elegance thrown in for good measure. 🌹
I like that for a comment
Cosmic .. I'm glad I swung by .. Neville
This is outstanding Rory, for me anyway
I love the lament of it, the soulful whispers to a muse ...far away,
'I wrote to the sea'
what a wonderful first line x
I won't tell you then, that I've used this line before. All well, they're my lines! I'll use them how ever many times I like. Lol
No rules in poetry...well there are but a great poet on here once told me...
rules are meant to be broken 🙃🙂😃
It's good to learn em before you brake em
Shit...hadn't thought of that...
Well just break them anyway
I'll stick up for you...promise 😆😆
Oh, you do write poetry for poets, dear. I will do my best to continue reading your work throughout the workdays and late at night when I am sick of my own thoughts.
This is beautiful, Rory.
Really great work
This is very special Rory .. Indeed, in my opinion, it is exceptional .. Neville