Poem -
Greater the search
You have to look for what makes you free in life.
I was awake as a bat at night searching for light.
I found strife instead and unless I felt the freedom
Sustaining me I think I would have surely died.
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Comments
Are you serious??? Look at your title.
This little poem have a deep meaning and it’s seriously good. B
Am open to title suggestions
Oh, you can leave like that,
I am saying “ look at your title” because your poem is NOT rubbish.
This is worth a thousand reads, once I got my head around the imagery and the emotion, the space to fly has reassured you that you know you are free, but the dark has captured you because you cannot find the light.
Rory I'm throwing some titles your way my friend take inspiration of you find it my friend.
A Bat out of Hell
To Die for Freedom
The Great Search
Light in the Light
Black as Night
Bleeding Heart
Blind as a Bat
And here's one that is really beautiful because it's in your first line...
(Look For What makes you Free)
And just some more because now you have inspired me.
From The Dark I Arose
Arising
I hope this helps. 🌹
Me ...I like to think I recognise the searching soul. Makes perfect sense to me. Not rubbish R. x
Love your new title it's says so much and I'm so many meanings 🌹
You've inspired a few titles by now, as well as at least one poem keep the gallop.
Keep them as you please these titles, and it's my pleasure always dear Rory. 🌹