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Greater the search

You have to look for what makes you free in life.
I was awake as a bat at night searching for light.

I found strife instead and unless I felt the freedomĀ 

Sustaining me I think I would have surely died.Ā 
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Bernadete van d...

Are you serious??? Look at your title.Ā 
This little poem have a deep meaning and it’s seriously good. Ā BĀ 

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Bernadete van d...

Oh, you can leave like that,
I am saying ā€œ look at your titleā€ because your poem is NOT rubbish.Ā 
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Shirley Harrison

This is worth a thousand reads, once I got my head around the imagery and the emotion, the space to fly has reassured you that you know you are free, but the dark has captured you because you cannot find the light.

Rory I'm throwing some titles your way my friend take inspiration of you find it my friend.Ā 

A Bat out of HellĀ 
To Die for Freedom
The Great SearchĀ 
Light in the LightĀ 
Black as NightĀ 
Bleeding HeartĀ 
Blind as a BatĀ 

And here's one that is really beautiful because it's in your first line...
(Look For What makes you Free)

And just some more because now you have inspired me.Ā 

From The Dark I AroseĀ 

ArisingĀ 

I hope this helps. 🌹 

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Marion

Me ...I like to think I recognise the searching soul. Makes perfect sense to me. Not rubbish R. x

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Shirley Harrison

Love your new title it's says so much and I'm so many meanings 🌹 

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Rory McGinlay

You've inspired a few titles by now, as well as at least one poemĀ  keep the gallop.

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Shirley Harrison

Keep them as you please these titles, and it's my pleasure always dear Rory. 🌹 

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