Perfect
" The strums in my Songs "

A grain of sand, is what a man for stands,
Sands in piles, is what makes a woman go wild,
But they do beach,
When the waves are beguiled at its peak,
Hmmm!
Should I just move on,
or
Perfect the strums in my songs ?

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Comments
Unusual but really pleasing lines in this. Enjoyed the read x
Thank you,
Marion,
I would say move on before you get washed away. Love the metaphors you use.
Thank you,
Sir. Bernie Martin,
I will indeed,
Move on, I canʻt swim,
Thank you,
Very creative. 🌹
Thank you,
Shirley Harrison,