Poem -
So
" Speaks the Beast "
A quell, to be fell, in the oceans of blue swells,
As to dine, in the blue moonสปs light,
To secure, of a lure, in the filth of a widowสปs pure,
A beauty smiles with teeth, and fangs hidden beneath.
So speaks the beast, of a friend in her true beauty.
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Comments
Very, very good write. Unique and creative. ย Bย
Thank you,
Bernadete van der Wielen,
I try,
Poetically I like the repeated internal rhyme scheme along a line. The key line for me is the penultimate one "a beauty smiles with teeth, and fangs hidden beneath." That line is deep and meaningful.ย
Thank you,
Sir. Bernie Martin,
Your wisdom and choice of words,
is as always,
indeed,
uplifting,
Thank you,
To echo yourself - I try. Thank you and you are very welcome.ย
Mysterious almost like a warning, maybe medusa is somewhere close by, intriguing and most original. ๐นย
Thank you,
Shirley Harrison,
You always bring,
A very great laughter,
You got me laughing,
Thank you,
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Thank you,
Sir. Jac Tales,
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