Poem -

CHILD

author
Marion

There   You have caught it
this look that I give, this one
Instant of time between

your eyes and mine
And There    You have saved it
And stored it away

this force of great love 

Now...  to school...  on your way,

M

 

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Rory McGinlay

I find the detail has been captured in this poem. 

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author
Marion

Thankyou R... you are a true gent my friend x
 

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