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Evolution

Evolution

We are snowmen of winter fame!
From the skies snowflakes came.
Obviously evolved from falling snow,
Perfect timing! as wind doth blow.

Mother comet; dropped water here,
After eons; clouds would appear.
Charlatans stories; of a creator!
Simply legends; of theater!

Someday understand the carrot nose,
Why appendage; sideways grows?
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Neville

although these words made me chuckle no end Jim one does not have to be a scientist to see that there is much more to them than at first meets the eye .. I note the date you posted this, which incidentally is my daughters birthday and the day she informed me I am going to become a grandfather ..

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Jim "The Lad" ....

great news Neville! CONGRATULATIONS! and so glad you got a chuckle!

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Marion

Jim this is amazing...truly..Brought a smile also. There is so much science can't explain my friend...and mostly what it does explain becomes outdated as new discoveries are made. Hold tight to your god lovely man...anyone lucky enough to have found one is to be envied in my book...hugs X

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Gwendoline

A fun rib tickling read Jim :) I love your humour through this write. Cleverly constructed xΒ 

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Cleo Tomi Olajide

Hi Jim... Lovely lovely lines... Glad I didn't miss this one. Warm regards.Β 

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Shaun Cronick

Deftly written Jim and the high spirits of comedy have certainly blessed your good self with this one and thanks for the chuckles my friend!!
Good stuff.
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Jim "The Lad" ....

love that you got chuckles Shaun! thank you for the support my friend!

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Shirley Harrison

Such magnificent imagery and wisdom. Loved this. 🌹 

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Glen Hill

Certainly a deeper write then the picture reveals, but when we think about it, how did we get here, a thought provoking piece.

Glen Hill

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