Poem -

Thank God

The sun is rising
the sun is setting
an optical illusion
the moon diminishes
the moon increases
an optical illusion
everything revolves
in a crazy firmament
but you, my love,
lie next to me
I touch your body
thank God
you're not an optical illusion.

 

Like 1 Pin it 1
Support CosmoFunnel.com

Support CosmoFunnel.com

You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.

Log in to leave a comment.

Comments

author
sparrowsong

Hello Me.Deleu...

Great point...

People pay to see an Optical Illusion if they want an up close view and maybe, be pointed to and they are now a Volunteer... 

Sometimes, we need/want a different show...

We live in one don't we?

​​​​​​Our hands do like things to hold, sometimes...

Right?

Love can make the World go around...

I think someone hit pause...

​​​​​I'm sure someone can get us going again...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

​​​​​​

 

Reply
Poem -

Drowned Words

Drowned Words

Drowned Words
It seems like an innocent journey
a breath of fresh air
among the mud...

Poem -

Never changing people

Conversation

Never changing people

If I could start my life over again,
I would never make the same mistakes.

Certainly not....

Poem -

Autumn Heart

Autumn Heart

Autumn Heart
In the golden glow of falling leaves, where trees whisper in soft splendor, love...

Latest poems in Freestyle

Poem -

Thank God

The little lesson I taught that girl today
Even surprised the hell out of me
and we were in...

Poem -

A Plea for Hedonism

A Plea for Hedonism

The Coalition of the Silly
has issued the following decree
written on the back
of a...

Poem -

2025 LOVEFEST

2025 LOVEFEST

Enemies become friends...

Then One takes a Knee...

How does a Nazi, King, Fascist, Hitler...

Advertise on CosmoFunnel.com