Poem - 17 August 2024, 07:31 drowning in you janie18 Drowning in you the waves crash high a tempest of emotions a stormy sky I gasp for air but in your depths I find my care a love so fierce it takes my breath In your arms I face my death Like 2 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 457 Rating: Total votes: 3 Poetry Genre: Freestyle Listed in: Contest Entries 2 comments
sparrowsong17 August 2024, 07:52 Hello Janie... 18 years old and you're talking about death... I don't think there's an age it doesn't come into our minds... ​​​​​​18 years old? ​​​​Has the Zest for life left the Planet? Is that why there's a lot less care? ​​​​​Sometimes, I feel like I'm an Alien when certain things are difficult for me to understand... Great write! Thank you for sharing... sparrowsong  Reply
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Hello Janie...
18 years old and you're talking about death...
I don't think there's an age it doesn't come into our minds...
​​​​​​18 years old?
​​​​Has the Zest for life left the Planet?
Is that why there's a lot less care?
​​​​​Sometimes, I feel like I'm an Alien when certain things are difficult for me to understand...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
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ty for kind comment sparrowsongÂ