I sense you have been linking poems the last few times you have posted. This poem could be like a postscript to your poem "unrequited love." It is simply stunning. Again it scans and I'm not sure whether the words just came to you or you had to play around with them until you got the right syllable count. Whichever it was you are a master at it. Love the alliteration on the last line.Â
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I sense you have been linking poems the last few times you have posted. This poem could be like a postscript to your poem "unrequited love." It is simply stunning. Again it scans and I'm not sure whether the words just came to you or you had to play around with them until you got the right syllable count. Whichever it was you are a master at it. Love the alliteration on the last line.Â