Poem -
What Lies Beneath
When I put myself in your shoes
It does not properly fit,
Not because I don’t see,
It’s because the pain is so yours
and only you know what lies beneath,
But I can sow a few seeds
so you can walk on flowers
In times of great need.
--Bernadete vdw, '25
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How relevant to us all
Thank you Rory. If you thinkÂ
this is relevant to all,
I am so happy to hear that.
Take good care of yourself, Â BÂ
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What a delightful little tapestry you have woven .. and so nicely sown together .. NevilleÂ
Neville, your words are poetry!Â
What a pleasure reading these words. Thank you for the treat
my friend. Â Â
BernadeteÂ
What I love about these words is the acknowledgement. No...the narrator cannot know the pain of another but is there to help ...and soften the way with a perfumed carpet. Lovely B x
“Soften the way with a perfumed carpet”… Marion, what a beautiful phrase. You also made poetry here. Stay well, stay inspired
my friend. Â BÂ