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author
al Bikaadi

I was grieving already 

but I didn’t know why 

Before that diagnosis 

I would cry cry cry 

A sorrow did niggle 

deep in my gut

I miss you mum 

believe it or not

 

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Tags: 
Loss
Poetry Genre: 
Elegy
Topic: 
Reality
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Marion

Short powerful lines that leave the reader in no doubt x

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