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Just Three Secrets

                                                                   Suddenly
                                                   and for no obvious reason ..
                                                            He remembered
                                                 something he had long since
                                                              forgot but had
                                                  hid in a diary, that he hoped
                                                              still kept safe,
                                                 the three secrets, he wanted
                                                              to take to his
                                                  grave when the time finally
                                                             came to let go
                                                and to say ciao to everyone ..
                                                       Yes, it was a real gas
                                             getting to make each one of you ..

 

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Marion

Ha.. enjoyably cryptic... but I think the answer just might be cleverly hidden  in the last 2 lines. Great stuff!!!  Good to see you back Nev xx

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Bernadete van d...

I am going to give you 4 stars, and you’ll get the 5th only if you tell us
what those 3 secrets are. For my part, I was born curious and I am dying 
to know it. I am not a “bribing” person, but just now …. I can’t resist!    B 

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Shaun Cronick

I'll join Marion's chorus and it's good to see you back Nev and trade her good for great to see you back and here's the kicker- I never knew you left!!
Been absent myself  but all good now.
So hello Nev and nice to see you haven't lost your touch here and deftly done and only you can write like this.
Only you.
For there are two ways of looking at it. 
It stays secret as secrets should regardless of how many involved, the number three a tease, or a big 3XL shower curtain is gonna be needed and a gasmask.

No doubt this is from your 354th book since I've been absent, so I'll check on Amazon and see what gems I've missed, the last one bought was Echoes Don't Tell Lies.
And have checked and bloody hell Nev, it's like Lee Child and the Jack Reacher series, you are prolific!
Quality has an audience and sells.
And sells well.
Guess the drinks are on you and I'll have a Guinness.
See and read you again and I will fill in those missing gaps.
And I now remember your superb end saying...

All good things to you :)

 

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