Poem -

200 Miles

(1)

Midnight running,

Where the view is so stunning,

Rolling down, the highway.

Moonlight shinning blue,

Reminding me of you,

A love scene, in a constant replay.

Reflection of stars,

On the pavement a far.

Two hundred miles of delay.

A cell phone dead zone,

My C.D. player’s players blown,

Try to focus, but my mind won’t obey.

(chorus)

Two hundred miles,

Of desert highway,

Never seen time, move so slow.

Feels like ten thousand minuets,

Anticipating,

Can you see? I need you so.

(2)

My eyes grow sleepy,

My coffee cup’s empty,

No room in my ashtray.

I need to find a phone,

Still knowing, that you’re at home,

I pull in, to an all-night café.

“A pay phone, have you seen one?”     

“At a museum” is all the clerk has to say.

“No big surprise” I say rolling my eyes,

Watching the minuets decay.

(Chorus)

(Guitar solo)

(3)

Blue light and gravity,

Like the bottom, of a sea,

No place in my heart to betray.

Tumble weeds cross the road,

Shadows of horny toads,

Should be home, at mid-day.

My mind full of fantasy,

Ecstasy you and me.

My mirror reflects my dismay.

The sound of my phone,

As I enter live zones,

I start texting you right away.

(Chorus) x2

200 hundred miles. The Misty Rose Band.

Daniel Templar 2012   

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Anthony Lane

I like it , but I think it needs a stronger chorus line.

~~

Two hundred miles,

Of desert highway,

Never seen time, move so slow.

Feels like ten thousand minuets,-------------------- ( Feels like the minuets,

Anticipating, -----------------------------------------------    are taking hours,

Can you see? I need you so--------------------------.~~Can you see? I need you so)

Feels like ten thousand minuets ----is just so long that it inhibits the flow a little.

This is only my opinion, but I did enjoy the song just the way you recorded it! Thanks, Anthony

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Quixotic Tin Hat

Thank you! so much Anthony I like your input and idea and agree an echo would make it better.

This is exactly why I like this sight 2 heads are better than 1. 

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