Poem -
Mental Rift
I already know
I'm different
It's in my system
Like 99 problems
And the count
Keeps lifting
I try to stay stable
But the tide keeps shifting
Like 99 problems
Go ahead, keep listing
My mind takes off
So at times
I seem missing
I dive so deep it seems
I'm still drifting
Not of this world
I hope
I'm still rifting
Like 99 problems
And the count
Keeps lifting
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Comments
This is stunning in it's roots..........the timing and the pulse of it.....wow........if Eminem had hold to this ....smokin' ass grooves my bruva!!.............listen in your head to this as a rap beat..........holy shit this is perfect 4/4 timing In musical rhythm and timing..........not a single beat out of place...........maximum craftsmanship bro...........dam! this is slammin!.......give up this shit & i'll turn it to two million dollahs!! (lol!)........sorry man, .......couldn't help it........been smokin' with my boyz............this is an awesome write man.............ttyl...........T xo
Funny, I wrote it rap-style *wink* thanks for stopping on by, I didn't think any would notice that, you've a keen ear for flow brother, thank s for the love and complimentary
love and respect
CO
Hello Curious...
When you get famous...
Remember sparrowsong...
I have a copy...
5* and fav...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Thanks Sparrowsong, I'll be sure to mention a certain feathered poet that is good at making smiles :)
Love and respect
CO