A Blue Print of My Life

The purest form of human love
Was imprinted on my soul
The instant my eyes beheld
The beauty of my little men
Placed in my own hands

They are my foundation
Drawing a blue print of my life
Highlighted in red by their hands
The guide for my life plans

A heart so full it could burst
Seeing love for me in their eyes
Trulyย  my gift for life
Love that never waivers
They have been my life savers

One son has many tattoos
In bright red on his hand
A heart with a eternal flame
Framed with my name "Momma"
What more can I say?

Two sons that are mine
Holds the blue print of my life
To leave behind when I go to live in the sky
Living on in their hearts and minds
So our love will never die

A Blue Print of My Life

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Ebrahim Alkadi

Charming and so lovely feelings for your sons....Allah the Almighty protect you all.

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Terry Kay

Ebrahim,ย  Many thanks to you.ย  Means a lot!ย  Love, Terry Kay

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Mitsali Fatima

Awe Terry this is the sweetest poem ever! You are an amazingly loving mother and such an inspiration, I'm sure you're boys appreciate you!
Awesome write :)

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Terry Kay

Mitsali,
Thank you.ย  Yes I am close to them and they are sweet big men now! ๐Ÿ˜Š Love, Terry Kay

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Simon Bromley

Beautifully written, I wish you all the greatest happiness.

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Terry Kay

Simon,. Thank you and I will take the happiness too please ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Šย  ย thanks again!ย  Love, Terry Kay

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Terry Kay

Kieran, .Many thanks to you my friend...love, Terry Kay

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Terry Kay

Why thank you so much.ย  I will put that comment in my pocket so I won't forget! ๐Ÿ˜Š .Love, Terry Kay

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Chris Bond

A beautiful write Terry , love shines through every verse x
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Terry Kay

Chris, Heartfelt thanks to you.ย  I appreciate your kind words.ย  Love, Terry Kay

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

Wow such a heartwarming beautifully sentimental poem, creatively expressed, the imprints on hearts mutually, maternal love shining brilliantly. Makes me think of my lil men..Kudos .

pls Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too

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Terry Kay

Thanks!!! I appreciate your comments!ย  Terry Kay

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

Awww....This brought tears to my eyes.ย  The bond between a mother and her children is such a powerful love...I understand this well!ย  Beautiful sentiments, Terry....I am sure you are a wonderful blessing to your sons....and your pride is evident too.....Lovely.ย  Love n Hugs, xoย ย 

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Terry Kay

Cherie, .Thank you.ย  Did you go riding?ย  Hope you guys had a good time.ย  Happy Easter!ย  Love, Terry Kay

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

Sorry I did not see your reply until now....but you know now that we did go horseback riding....sorry I am so behind in responses....so much going on...I love your writes....xo

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Larry Ran

My Dear Terry,

The "Blueprint Of Your Life", is one of the most beautifully architected poems I have ever read.ย  It is replete with your love for your two dear sons, and overflowing with the purest passion!
I am sure that there were many tears shed by its readers.

Love,
Larry xxx

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Terry Kay

Dear Larry,

I am so touched by your kind words and they mean the world to me coming from such a fine man as yourself.ย  Thank you for making my day.ย  I know you are enjoying your new puppy.ย  I have thought about y'all seeing that you weren't on Cosmo.ย  I told my mom you were probably busy with the new member of the family.ย  Love,ย  Terry Kay ๐Ÿ˜Š

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lodigiana

Reading your poem reminds me of the immense love I have for my own son..I feel blessed to have himย  and your touching, truthful and emotional words reawakend the depth of love we can feel for our children. Very nice work hun! Lodigiana xx

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Terry Kay

Thank you so much.ย  It sure is tough when they leave.ย  My boys were 15 years apart and now I am a little of a loss as to what to do now.ย  THank you again.ย  Terry Kay

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

CONGRATULATIONS on winning in the poetry contest!ย  You deserve it!ย  I love how emotional your work is and this one is a great example of your sensitivity in your poetry.ย  ย Love you girl!ย  ((((((hugs)))))) xo

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Terry Kay

Hi Cherie,ย  Thank you bunches!ย  I feel so big headed!ย  Emailed th e email to a lot of friends.ย  Even sang a little bit in a video to one friend! Lolย  Thanks Sweetie....๐Ÿ˜Š It was fun...

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Terry Kay

Ebrahim,. Thank you so much.ย  You just warmed my heart a little. Love, Terry Kay

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Preacher Of Ete...

Nothing compares to this feeling. The feeling of parenting.
Nice writing.

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Terry Kay

Thank you so much!ย  I feel blessed and humbled.ย  Love, Terry Kay

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Terry Kay

Congrats right back at you. Simon I just finished my morning chores and picked up my tablet to send you a message.ย  Oh my God...we may forever be physically connected! ๐Ÿ˜Šย  Love . Terry Kay

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Rose Sho

Congrats on a well deserved win...This is a very beautiful piece, Terry

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Terry Kay

Rose,ย  Thank you so much.ย  Means the world to me that you like my little poem!ย  Love, Terry Kay

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Terry Kay

Cleo,ย  Thank you so much!ย  I appreciate your feedback.ย  Love, Terry Kay

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Jane

This is really beautiful ๐Ÿ’›

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Terry Kay

Jane, Thank you very much for your kind words.ย  Welcome to Cosmo.ย  Terry Kay

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