A Bowl Full of Nothing
Having dropped another stitch,
She looked up, from the tear in her shawl
and my word, did she frown ..
What we seem to have here, she said,
without a shadow of doubt, is a shed load
of lies, broken promises and vows ..
But hey, keep your chin up love and
just float upon clouds ..
She seemed intent on going up and up ..
While he, my friend was spinning down
Head first and into an empty bowl
filled to the very top, with absolutely nothing
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Neville, this abstract write actually for me (and I could be wrong) felt so very sad. For she seems to be settled in her fate. Yet he suffers, knowing he will be lost without her. There is much sorrow the be found in these words and also a sense of one person making peace with the inevitable
Like I say, just my take. But this is a very clever write x
I do like your take on my little scribble Gwen .. and just between you n me .. you have an amazing gift when it comes to takes and take-ability
:) x
You make pondering on things delightful my friend. Your pen is mighty, as is your mind x
Go on, make me blush why dont'cha ............................ X