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A BRIGHT LIGHT SHINES

A BRIGHT LIGHT SHINES

I can hear my wife crying

My children crying too

The machine

Is breathing for me

And I don`t know what to do

-*-

I try to say

Look, I’m alright

But not a sound comes out

I’m trying to move my body

And inside

I start to shout

-*-

Then silence

as they leave the room

I lay there all alone

I’m praying that

it’s just a dream

I`ll wake up

and be home

-*-

A long time passes

A day or more

Or that’s how it appears

I hear footsteps

In the room, again

As I realize my fears

-*-

They play My favorite music

And say, how much they care

They tell me, that they miss me

And that they know, that I’m still there

-*-

Doctor, can he hear us

are we just, grasping at straws

The doctor says, I’ll do some tests

And then, I’ll tell you more

-*-

My wife comes back into the room

She holds my hand and sobs

The kids are crying now as well

As the nurses do their jobs

-*-

Please take as long as needed

To say your last goodbye’s

Panicking franticly

I, try opening my eyes

-*-

I’m shouting, I’m still here

As the breathing tubes took out

And Then, the room goes silent

As my heart begins to pound

-*-

Then suddenly calmness

Like a blanket covers me

I feel I’m getting weaker

But, it doesn’t frighten me

-*-

A bright light shines

Upon my face

And suddenly, I see

not the room, that I was in

but a flower, covered field

-*-

And there running towards me

Smiling, filled with glee

Are all my long-passed relatives

Who were waiting there for me

-*-

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sparrowsong

Hello Tom...

Welcome to Cosmo! 

This reminds me of when my Brother was in a coma...

They were waiting for his heart to stop beating...

Fluids were going through the IV but, the rest of his organs had shut down one at a time...

I said a prayer silently so my Dad couldn't hear me...

That morning I was told they're drowning his heart...

I prayed for loving arms to bring him with them...

Great write! 

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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TOM FRANCIS

Thank you

my mum passed a few years ago

and i had was the one who had to say

turn off the machine, i never stopped thinking

did she know, so i wrote this to help me deal with it really

thanks agian

Tom

xx

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sparrowsong

Hello Tom...

You knew your Mum better than most...

People that are on life support and it's a difficult decision...

I always told my family if anything like that happens to me and there is severe brain damage I wouldn't want to live like that...

I wouldn't want them to see me like that...

If our parents never speak of their wishes we sometimes have to ask would they want to live that way?

Would we?

I am very sorry for your loss and being put in that position...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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