A Broken Family

As a hushed tone of forgetfulness whispered through the crisp frost covered leaves
A man walked rushed but nonetheless inspired to spill out his heart which he wore upon his sleeves
He reaches his home and opens the door to feel a blast of heart warming heat but he turns to see a mother grieving in her seat
Briskly he walks but softly he talks in a small voice inaudible to anyone but him he makes his way up the spiral staircase
Into his room he goes now it seems as if his life is fair chase he opened his window to breathe but shuts it quickly he feels trapped in his on home like the walls are talking and won't leave him alone
he sits at his desk with a piece of paper and a feather dips the feather in the blood from his heart on his sleeve and begins to grieve as he writes...
Dear Dad I loved you like no other now it's just me, Mom and my brother we're scared what are we gonna do hide under a frickin cover you didn't have to beat on her then shove her you could have loved us instead of giving us a cold shoulder it's hard to cry on a shoulder when your tears turn to ice now we're running out of money and my little brother has lice we already gave up the car I wonder what else we will sacrifice oh and by the way if your reading this it's probably too late because I found you.
After writing it he puts it under his bed in a box labeled dad along with a loaded gun and a letter titled to my favorite son.
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Y'all been sleeping on me this is good
No, I'm wide awake, Daniel.
I generally only read the work of those who read my own.
You know, the old "give and take" thing?
~Dean Kuch ?
Alright bruh, you should hit this up and lmk what you think I will be sure to show some love to your poetry
This is my YouTube channel with my rap
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCltZ0xRRFVS0vUWS3d7wHQg
You got it...
I'm listenin' to "Till I Die I'm Praisin' You" right now.
Spiritually based rap...very nice.
I turned your channel onto my son and his friends. He raps too.
Best of luck, Daniel.
God Bless.
~Dean Kuch ♛✞♛
Thanks Dean! Have fun with poetry! Your pretty good at it!
Hey, it helps to pay the bills, ya know?
You do the same.
~Dean
By the way, which poem did you read?
I see no review from you...?♂️