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A DAMN FINE SKY

God got out his paintbrush
Today
I told him to...put...it...
Away
I got the picture

Sure, he popped an angel in
Here.ย  ย  And.ย  ย There.
Andย boy, he can paint a damn
fine sky
Silver linings all shimmering
All those rainbows
Skipping high

It was beautiful...at...first...
Untill he painted the earth
Which was black
So were we
Just all black earth and sea

All the beautyย 
Topย 
Heavy
No paint left for me
No ladder either

M P 12/4/21

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Jill Tait

Awwwww Marion your words are so heartfelt ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’™

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Marion

๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

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Jill Tait

๐Ÿ’•โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’•

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Marion

Thankyou Greg ๐Ÿค—

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Shelley-anne St...

Wow. So visual. Storytelling with brevity. Such a heartfelt poem as always Marion. Really enjoyed the imagery and concept here โคโ˜€

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Marion

Thanks Shelley...appreciated ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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Being Me

I read this poem to my daughter and she agreed with me ... this poem is exceptional in every way โš˜x

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Marion

Wow ..I'm really honoured you both liked it Tina...hope the book is coming along well love โ™ฅ๏ธ

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