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A darkness of duller

A darkness of duller

I open my eyes and only blackness I see, there is no vision at all to safely guide me.. not a glimpse of light, nor a streak of colour..everything around me is a darkness of duller..

So I stop and I study but it is as black as ink giving me goosebumps as I imagine and think..though why are we so scared of the absolute unknown? stood lost in a nothingness apprehensive and alone..I spread out my arms to immediately feel and my reaction is raw and a huge real deal, coz I am stuck in a rut of an open space without a hint of an awareness from my memory trace..

Wow what a worrying world with a bleakness of blight, when that flicker switches off betwixt the dead of the night..And only the sounds from hidden voices within, one’s alarm buttons are panicking making reality a sin..I do not like feeling fear from this sudden blindness, I can not see a thing within woeful unkindness...

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The fish of the sea

Interesting write Jill, would love to know what this is inspired by. I hope we on the Cosmo can bring light to your day/night. Best wishes to you. The Fish of the Sea 

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Jill Tait

Lol God knows I just imagined mysell in an empty blackness but I am not depressed, hoping I haven’t given off gloomy thoughts... not intended at all my lovely ❤️💕❤️

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Jill Tait

Awww you are so kind Jim Thanks so much for your encouragement my poetic penfriend ❤️💙❤️

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Marion

Excellent write Jill...this is such a difficult thing to put into words yet I felt it...really good Mrs Tait!!! 💕

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Jill Tait

Teehee Well Thank you Mrs Price!!! 🤣❤️💕❤️

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