Poem -
A Depression Poem
I've given all my cares away
I hardly care at all today
I've used up all the life in me
on wild, frolicking fantasy
my fancy head thought she could fly
and floated far into the sky
there's little left to grasp in hand
the rest is silty, slippery sand
I cannot build a life from this
I can't pull strength from the abyss
my empty heart knows I'm to blame
at least I still can feel some shame
I've given all my cares away
to something that could never stay
I've used up all the life in me
that's why I write so crappily
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Comments
I feel like I should have bought a ticket to your show
😆
Misery loves comedy lol loving the rhyme, life is a phase this phase will pass but for now a very entertaining piece. I'm not sure if life will get more crappily but you sure sound fun, and that is the true work to bring the emotions to the reader. 🌹
Such true words! ❤️ (And thank you too)
I love fun and humour it makes my life much more enjoyable
I don't think this has been written crappily at all. I love this poem, I don't like the fact you are depressed — that's not good at all and I'm sorry you are feeling this way. But your poem? Your poem is good x
Thank you 😊 I am not depressed anymore thankfully. (The crappily line cheered me up the most hahaha)
Beautifully written x
Thanks! 🙃