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A Feast For The Crows

A Feast For The Crows

Real and fortunate souls
righteous enough with ridden haste
steal only a glimpse
before memory serves them well
in making it a forgotten place.

The backdrop bled obsidian black
cascading darkness off suicide cliffs
below, enfolded arms of rock bottom 
await escape in freedom hell,
truth...places like this only exist
observed by demon's oblivion eyed dark nothingness.

There atop the desolate apex
hung half a'h dozen or so man-
sized corroding cages, suspended out over 
a sunless horizon,  those occupants 
never, or will never sense that angel's warm nova touch of sun...again.

Flocks of flapping coal colored crows
ripple teasing winds across tortured faces
breaking sweat from stinging eyes
seeing devil birds touch down with an elemental surprise.

Windows to the soul
make for great hor d'oeuvres,
rattling metal, bone-chilling screams
works up the birds
appetite of flesh,

Man meat rots
in the heat of dark rays
while cackling crows
watch with vulture tendencies
clinging to feast 
so greedily overfilled 
enduring evil natures of the beast
bathed in blood preying beaks have spilled.

Mad men rage
with mercy cries and wicked moans,
death awaits in a cliff hanger cage
with a quick sweep of the last unfortunates picked
clean bones,
echoing locks, harshness squawks 
a symbolic bell
the banquet is served.

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Richard Waters

Breath-taking character to this piece which shows what a gift you have !

Great work with a sublime title !

All the best to you my friend.

:)

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Devon La Porte

Thank you so much Richard. Iam happy that I finally finished this piece, I've been writing this for weeks, and hey who knows it might not be done. Much respect for you too brother.

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Tony Taylor

WOW!! ~ DEVON!!......LOVE the way this builds to the final stanza......filled with dark images that bring so many images .....from books to films to my minds eye.....this is an excellent display of just how important word choices are to a poem........you've created something VERY special here brother.......if this isn't nominated......there's something wrong!!.......ALL STARS........PINNED......kick ass.........T xo

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Devon La Porte

Wow T you really think so man? I would be as honored as I am by your comment. Thank you. Like I said to Cherie iam not feeling it as much lately but iam trying to power through it mind over matter, continue reading and being inspired but it is so much start and stops and titles with blank pages and words without voice that leave me shaking my head and I am one who hates to admit writers block im just to versatile for that bs lol, It is me and only me who limits myself, but I am definitely looking for a way to shake things up and that could be my problem. Hey brother with you and C and so many others flooding so much talent on here it is such inspiration and iam ever thankful for the support. Love and the always pursuited peace!

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