A flower rained

like a flower rained
my eyes look up to her eyes
and i thought there should be no end
For this is Love my lips have touched
In a second ...a moment....i looked across and saw
a flicker of light
then a feeling of something new within my heart
came to me as a delight
a force so mighty
yet a pleasure at the same time
then ....
a petal of tear fell upon my face
another yet another and another
more i thought....don't stop....it poured....a pleasant wetness
then there were another another flicker of light....that whispered.....take me....take me..my LoVe
and another petal fell
a union of some kind upon myself
i then smiled and held her like my life
oh what joy i felt...that night she wept.....of love
while lightening fill my heart..my eyes
how beautiful a flower rained
upon my heart....that night

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Comments
With this delightful image/metaphor you deftly draw the whole poem together. It's a masterstroke which imbues the whole piece with a bitter-sweetness evocative of truly heartfelt love.
Lovely!
J ;)
OK....Thank You Jason...appreciated.
Hi Lorris A beautiful poem you create
beautiful imagery
A pleasure to read !
Best wishes Debs
Thank you Deborah
" I then smiled and held her like my life ! "
Beautiful meaningful intelligent line from a gorgeous write.
Best wishes to you ! :)
Thank you again Richard
:)
So moving - straight from the heart. Loved your poem!
Thank you..Mervyn...
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Thank you for reading
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