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A flower rained

A flower rained

like a flower rained
my eyes look up to her eyes
and i thought there should be no end
For this is Love my lips have touched

In a second ...a moment....i looked across and saw 
a flicker of light
then a feeling of something new within my heart
came to me as a delight

a force so mighty
yet a pleasure at the same time
then ....
a petal of tear fell upon my face

another yet another and another
more i thought....don't stop....it poured....a pleasant wetness
then there were another another flicker of light....that whispered.....take me....take me..my LoVe

and another petal fell
a union of some kind upon myself
i then smiled and held her like my life

oh what joy i felt...that night she wept.....of love
while lightening fill my heart..my eyes
how beautiful a flower rained
upon my heart....that night

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Jason Brown

a petal of tear fell upon my face

With this delightful image/metaphor you deftly draw the whole poem together. It's a masterstroke which imbues the whole piece with a bitter-sweetness evocative of truly heartfelt love.

Lovely!

J ;)

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Deborah Evans

Hi Lorris A beautiful poem you create 
beautiful imagery 
A pleasure to read !
Best wishes Debs 

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Richard Waters

" I then smiled and held her like my life ! "

Beautiful meaningful intelligent line from a gorgeous write.

Best wishes to you !  :)

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Mervyn Lickfold

So moving - straight from the heart. Loved your poem!

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