Poem -
A HARVEST OF THORNS
Please!!
Let me drown in my sorrows
Let me waste my life away
I have no cares for tomorrow
Forever darkness my heart prays
I wish I could erase every good thought
My mind has conceived of you
And may you be condemned by the gods
For piercing my heart through
You have brought me such sadness
My heart is consumed with pain
My love cannot be resuscitated
My life I live in vain
You've left me for another
Trampling my very soul
I curse the day I met you
May your days be as dark
As your carnivorous soul.
Wilford Barker.
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Comments
wow what great poem
this also could be song
Hi Greg.
Thank you very much.. never thought about the song thing.. but you might just have something there.. lol.
Very well done! ??
Hello John..
My sincere thanks for being so kind.
My Dear Wilford,
This is another brilliant picture you have painted, about unrequited love. The broken heart controls the pen, that so powerfully describes the shredded Soul. The all-consuming palpable pain of this poor jilted man, brings teardrops to the readers eyes. Bravo, five stars and pinned!
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Hi Larry..
I am grateful for such Explosive comments..
My heartfelt thanks to you my cyber friend..
My "explosive" comments are engendered by the explosive power of your writes.
Larry xxx